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Happy Holiday Senryu I
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Happy Holiday Senryu I |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(Inspired by my sweet friends BloomingRose and Catalinamoon) Happy Holidays Senryu Volume I By: Noah Eaton 12/11/01 Ice Angel’s Soliloquy In the velvet snow Ice angel’s soliloquy Lights Christmas with love The Glass Blower’s Prayer The glass blower welds Angels and swans of sheer ice For blessed girls and boys Snowflakes Dance Snowflakes dance ballet Leaping happily in waltz To loves warm kisses |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
ok..I wasn't totally right about the song thing. These are definitely straight forward poems. I do like the structured poems as well...nice work, Noah.  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Noah, I liked the Snowflakes Dance best, but all three were good. The imagery was strong. Nan |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah, Your words beautiful Painting such sweet descriptions So stunning in verse  Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Such stunning visions your brought to life, Noah. Beautiful. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
These are very nice, although I not sure just what a Senryu is and isn’t, I found yours as sweet and nice as you seem to be. Bill |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
wonderfully done... regards, sudhir |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
These are beautiful, Noah...brevity and this form become you very well... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Like it a lot Noah Charisma |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah you do these beautifully, I am inspired to try some too Sandra |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The Christ Child is born In Bethlehem's manger blessed God's gift to the world |
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