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Night Magic |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio 
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Held onto in the brisk autumn night With strength and passions delight Unrecognized afore romance's plight, There, two souls gain secret insight... To gather courage whilst nerves abound Envelope, encompass, ekeout, surround, Entities procuring naught a sound, Yet, inside stirring's quite profound... Gentle wind breathes sultry whispers, aquiver Brought forth with apparent night's shiver Held onto secure by masculine lither, Beckoning heartsounds like musical zither... Procuring a truth in the brisk autumn night Basked in the moon's profuse delight, Thus recognized immediate romance's plight... We, two souls gain love's insight. [This message has been edited by Sally S. (edited 12-11-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Enjoyed, I don't believe I remember you, good to read you! Kathleen (Kay) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sally, Wow.. I love this! I could NEVER write a format like this. Well done  and muchly enjoyed!Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Sensually romantic. This poem flow like a rare wine...filled with body and romance. I love it. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sally~ This is delicately lovely~ It's so nice to see you~ You've been missed .. hope you'll stay a while~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend! (smiles) The beauty of your words shines with love and romance! (kiss on cheek) We all love you sweet friend, my happiness forever fill your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sally, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
I envy all the rhyme because it does not feel stiff. It is not something I could do Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Irish Rose..Thank you for the comment...You probably don't remember me because I have faded away quietly um...some time ago, I believe. Every once in awhile, I show up to see the gang and to peek at a few newbies' work. Then, I fade away once more. I do so love this place though...it was my home away from home for a time.Wow, Angel Noah Person!!! Hugs and kisses and eeeeverythin'??? Smiles to ya...Thank you most kindly for such a sweet reply. Marge, Nice to see you as well and nice to know I've been missd...even just a weeeeee bit. hehehe ~Never know where I'll be...here or there....hmmmmm~ Thank you. Startime, Love the simile! How flattering...my thanks to you. Tara...yes, you can write in this style. Start in a mimicing manor then adapt your own style to it. Simple, eh? Thank you for the wonderful compliment. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Snuck up on me, Dan. Thank you. I'm glad you liked it and noticed I wasn't a stiff. giggles |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
SALLY!!!  How wonderful to see you again...one of the "old" gang!  I see you haven't lost your flair for beautiful poetry. Stick around for a bit. We've missed you! |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Deeeeer!!! Bout time you showed up! LOL Thank you for that. I've missed this place as well. How are you???? Whatchabeendoinandallthatstuff???? ~S |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nice to meet you, Sally. This is a wonderfully romantic poem. "Procuring a truth in the brisk autumn night Basked in the moon's profuse delight," What nice flow and rhyme! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Hey Missy!!! How are you? Gosh it's been a long time. I'm so glad to 'read' you again. I loved the poem by the way. I think someone needs to chain you to the PiP door so you can't run out for a while.  |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Nice to meet you too, midnitesun! Hiya SSSSSSSSSS!!! Oh, PD..I've been great..really! Chaining me to the door, eh? Hmmmmm.  |
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