Open Poetry #17 |
Reflections of a Touch |
Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Looking out the window at the land rolling by, She remembers his touch, the look of his eyes. She strokes her soft hair as he did that last night, Touching her heart until the morning's first light. Outside the window, the scenes shift and play. But, in their reflection, she remembers that day. The day when all he knew was his love for her, Ever since then, her life has just been a blur. For all that mattered was the love in her heart. The love for him that had been there from the start. It was a love that shone brighter than the sun, And she knew, deep in her soul, that he was the one. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"What light through yonder window breaks?" This is a step back into time...it's lovely Kathleen (Kay) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A beautiful depiction of the depth of love felt....Such a powerful feeling. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
You do write, beautifully, Romeo. This made my heart smile and my eyes water. Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Romeo, This is pretty. I liked it. Nan |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A very romantic write. Thank you for sharing this. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is quite lovely, and I know of one who will treasure it, besides myself, that is... Thank you! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Very romantic and lovely.... thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Thank you all for your wonderful comments. You do make it nice to post here. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Sweet Romeo! You don't write here often enough. I guess once in a while we all fade back into the picture a little bit, but when you come out of hiding, your words splash beauty across this tapestry of poets. This was wonderful, but perhaps there's more? I am many. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Tis a beautiful thing you write Romeo. I can picture the scene so vividly. You do have the perfect pen name for your writings. I hope there is a Juliet to appreciate them too. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
....beautifully penned, and I *sighed*... "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Another round of this, please! On me. I am many. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~For all that mattered was the love in her heart. The love for him that had been there from the start. It was a love that shone brighter than the sun, And she knew, deep in her soul, that he was the one.~ Beautifully penned.....enjoyed it very much Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet romeo, this is soooooo gorgeous! (smiles) May her heart forever shine with his love ever after! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so very much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Moonlight Romeo, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Romeo...the name suits perfectly for romance and passion flow from your pen so easily. Magnificent. I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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