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Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

0 posted 2001-12-11 02:24 PM

Looking out the window at the land rolling by,
She remembers his touch, the look of his eyes.
She strokes her soft hair as he did that last night,
Touching her heart until the morning's first light.

Outside the window, the scenes shift and play.
But, in their reflection, she remembers that day.
The day when all he knew was his love for her,
Ever since then, her life has just been a blur.

For all that mattered was the love in her heart.
The love for him that had been there from the start.
It was a love that shone brighter than the sun,
And she knew, deep in her soul, that he was the one.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-12-11 02:50 PM

"What light through yonder window breaks?"

This is a step back into time...it's lovely

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2001-12-11 04:14 PM

A beautiful depiction of the depth of love
felt....Such a powerful feeling.

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-12-11 04:57 PM

You do write, beautifully, Romeo. This made my heart smile and my eyes water.

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2001-12-11 05:12 PM

Dear Romeo,
This is pretty. I liked it.

Nan

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2001-12-11 05:35 PM

A very romantic write. Thank you for sharing this.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

6 posted 2001-12-11 05:38 PM

This is quite lovely, and I know of one who will treasure it, besides myself, that is...

Thank you!

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

7 posted 2001-12-11 05:45 PM

Very romantic and lovely....

thank you
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Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

8 posted 2001-12-12 02:08 PM

Thank you all for your wonderful comments. You do make it nice to post here.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

9 posted 2001-12-12 10:39 PM

Sweet Romeo!

You don't write here often enough. I guess once in a while we all fade back into the picture a little bit, but when you come out of hiding, your words splash beauty across this tapestry of poets.

This was wonderful, but perhaps there's more?

I am many.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

10 posted 2001-12-12 10:48 PM

Tis a beautiful thing you write Romeo. I can picture the scene so vividly. You do have the perfect pen name for your writings. I hope there is a Juliet to appreciate them too.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2001-12-12 10:50 PM

....beautifully penned, and I *sighed*...

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2001-12-13 12:37 PM

Enjoyed reading this...James

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

13 posted 2001-12-14 06:01 AM

Another round of this, please! On me.

I am many.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

14 posted 2001-12-15 04:58 PM

~For all that mattered was the love in her heart.
The love for him that had been there from the start.
It was a love that shone brighter than the sun,
And she knew, deep in her soul, that he was the one.~

Beautifully penned.....enjoyed it very much

Charisma

~*Theresia~*

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

15 posted 2001-12-15 05:03 PM

(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet romeo, this is soooooo gorgeous! (smiles) May her heart forever shine with his love ever after! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so very much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Moonlight Romeo, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

16 posted 2001-12-15 10:06 PM

Romeo...the name suits perfectly for romance and passion flow from your pen so easily. Magnificent. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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