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0 posted 2001-12-10 09:06 PM




Living Inside A SnowGlobe

I love the magic of this day
Cold to colder still
Living in a round snowglobe
Giving me a thrill

Crystal flakes falling down
All around this house
Makes me feel so very small
Like a Christmas mouse

If I use imagination
And giggle in my soul
Why then you can shake me up
And stir this snowy cold

'Round me silver slivers fly
These sparkling crystal flakes
Chill winds will lift to sigh
Just by your very shake

Jiggle my snowglobe merrily
Give me a little thrill
Better yet come sing me verily,
And warm away the chill


~*~


10 December 2000
revised 10 December 2001


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-10 09:11 PM


jiggling here...
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2 posted 2001-12-10 09:17 PM




(sigh) Oh Karilea, this is sooooooo beautiful! I love snow globes, and I always feel a sense of peace and fantasy behind them! (sigh) I love your gorgeous words, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet sunshine, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-10 09:21 PM


Beautiful Karilea....I always enjoyed shaking
the snowglobe and watching the flakes fall.

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4 posted 2001-12-10 09:42 PM


Beautiful Karilea!  I love snowglobes year round!  They are just so amazing to watch...mesmorizing, almost like gazing into a crystal ball.  Enjoyed this piece, I did!!
~hugs, Nancy~  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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5 posted 2001-12-10 09:57 PM


I love snowglobes and I love the snow. There is just something so magical and romantic about the snow. This poem brought me the same kind of feelings. **hugs** I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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6 posted 2001-12-11 01:00 AM


Giggle giggle jiggle jiggle
Shake that globe!

I like this fun poem!

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7 posted 2001-12-11 06:58 AM


lovely...

thanks for this treat...

regards,
sudhir

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8 posted 2001-12-12 09:11 PM



Karilea-
   Loving this, I am.
   Wonderful write, my friend.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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9 posted 2001-12-17 12:25 PM


Seasonally superb  

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10 posted 2001-12-17 01:11 PM


This is what I saw inside mine when I read your poem! Love snowglobes.

~*~  May the spirit of this season live in your heart all year through ~*~


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11 posted 2001-12-17 01:41 PM


Kari darling sister of my heart   I remember this I loved it then I love it more now. Darling girl this is without doubt one of your utter best, you really are getting to be soooooooooo good. I ought to in truth be wishing you all kinds of bad things because I’m Green with jealousy. However how can I be jealous of this it is utterly wonderful, as are you
Fabulous writing darling girl utterly fabulous
Now wish me a Merry Christmas and I'll tell you it's going to be wonderful. It is you know darling girl a most wonderful time of the year. And this year it's fabulous, don't you think I suit happy? Mmmmm I do don't I.
I love this, I love you sister mine, and I love love.  
            
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy
    


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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