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Carol Luna
Member

since 2001-12-06

Posts 55

0 posted 2001-12-10 07:53 PM

Yes, I want you!

Chase me now!
Down this stretch of beach,
oh, Laugh with me, I hear your
footsteps closer!
Now, the rain is falling, falling
soft as yellow spring,
they are our kisses yet to be tasted,
oh, catch me!

You are more than longing, you are more
than desire, for were you not to love me,
I would shamelessly beg you to satisfy me!
Love me, though, my darling, love me!

You've caught me!
Whisper sweet erotica into my ear,
Fill your hands with my hair, entangle
me within your web, I do not want to be free!
Tender....love me tender,
touch me without pause,
until you have removed every
layer with your eyes, your need
for I have already surrendered.

Carol Luna
~give me peace, no matter what the cost~

[This message has been edited by Carol Luna (edited 12-10-2001).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2001-12-10 07:58 PM

Oh yes, I am right there with this.. beautiful, soft, sexy, and just how I used to feel about someone. Sigh..
Excellent piece.
Sandra

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2001-12-10 07:59 PM

*sigh* it would be nice to have someone like this to love. This poem is sensually beautiful and filled with nice naughtiness. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-12-10 08:08 PM

(big hugggssssss) Mmmmmmmm...you burn this blue pages with such sweet passion! (smiles) So beautifully sensual, I love it! (kiss on cheek) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) I always love your words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Carol, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2001-12-10 08:28 PM

Why can't more women say this.....and to me!?

to blazes with coyness! Say it like it is! I love it

Carol Luna
Member

since 2001-12-06

Posts 55

5 posted 2001-12-11 12:18 PM

Sandra, thank you! It's nice to write of longing and desire, nothing wrong with it at all right?

Karen, I'm glad you liked this! thank you

Noah, you're sweet, thank you!

Balladeer, I am so glad I put a smile on your face!
thank you for reading!

Carol Luna
~give me peace, no matter what the cost~

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