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Carol Luna
Member

since 2001-12-06

Posts 55

0 posted 2001-12-10 06:18 PM

Your presence is like the
pull of the tide
braved by the moon
drawing me...
to you
Your presence is like the
pull of the tide.

Your voice is the sound
of wind chimes
moving over my flesh-
fluttering against my skin,
calling me, pleasuring me
inviting me
to make love with you
your voice is the sound of wind chimes.

Your love is like a moonflower
opening, receiving me
encircling me, if you allow me
to come to you.

Your hands are as cups that
give ministrations
holding me in esteem...yes
your hands are as cups that
give ministrations
when we make love I will fill them,
endlessly.

My lashes will touch your
face in one moment
of inhibition....
feel......this soft shadow of desire
Feel the surrender to the pull,
to the sound of the wind chimes,
receiving me, holding me,
making love to me.

Come let us climb together.

Carol Luna
~give me peace, no matter what the cost~

[This message has been edited by Carol Luna (edited 12-10-2001).]

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

1 posted 2001-12-10 06:22 PM

Wow! I really enjoyed this work of art! Great imagery! Great read!

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-12-10 06:25 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet Carol! (smiles) Your lips speak with the jingle of windchimes chanting with true loves spirit! (sigh) May this soft shadow of eternity forever cover both of your hearts and bring your heart into true love forever! You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Carol, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-12-10 06:25 PM

BRAVO!!!Not only can one see the vision of this poem but feel the passion in it as well. Magnificent. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Rogue24
Member

since 2001-12-01

Posts 111
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2001-12-10 06:29 PM

Enchanting to read! To read such a write, forces me to relive a passion, to smile at the thot of an intimate embrace. HUGS
Ter.

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-12-10 06:34 PM

I can feel the wind chimes...moving over my chest...this is good...James

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2001-12-10 07:17 PM

Carol...I love the way you have described
this....well done.

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

7 posted 2001-12-10 10:35 PM

you have familiarity in your style that i'll be sure to recognize when reading you again...
welcome to the blue pages

i guess the Luna made you swoona, huh?

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

8 posted 2001-12-11 12:37 PM

Carol.so very romantic and defintely full of lovely thoughts.

Juanita

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

9 posted 2001-12-11 01:16 PM

Whoa nelly, this is a great passionate write!
It's always nice to be in love!

RP

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

10 posted 2001-12-11 02:02 PM

Beautiful and romantic.

Carol Luna
Member

since 2001-12-06

Posts 55

11 posted 2001-12-11 03:24 PM

Thank you sweet poet people for reading my passion seeping all over these blue pages, it is a glorious feeling indeed and you honor me with your kind words!!!

Carol Luna
~give me peace, no matter what the cost~

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