Open Poetry #17 |
Soft Whispers |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Will I ever find the words that heal. Words that can take away the ache. Soft wishful whispers to caress Light touches to help sooth Lightly I will touch your brow Letting your heart rest, mind relax. Long I will stand watch over you. Keeping ever vigilant of your needs. The soft beams of a moon touch you. Calm breezes flow through your hair. Birds will sing joyful songs to you. I, your servant, do so humbly serve. Remember the songs of love and laughter. Do not let your memory of eyes fade. Keep your heart filled with true love. Listen to the distant call of the night. The gleam now diminished will return. Having known pure love, never lost. A soul alone, will find treasure. Two hearts apart shall beat again strong. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Your hope and compassion for all the lovers of the world echo from your loving heart, dearest friend, it takes a lot of strength and courage, but your heart marches with pure faith! (sigh) Your compassion shines from your golden pen always, your beautiful words never cease to amaze me! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You and have the happiest holidays! You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* All the gentle words that come from your heart seem to be soft as whispers. Beautiful writing, Magnus. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very nice, Barry Kathleen (Kay) |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Ah, how nice is this. It softly touch my heart. May love feel your wings, and thy hearts be one again. ~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Magnus, Such stunning words.. you put them together well I definately enjoyed. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Awww! This poem reminds me of just how much joy love brings to someone! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kay...thank you...sometimes something a little soothing is in order for many of us. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah..as always...thanx for your kindness. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Karen...your feelings of my words mean much to me. Happy you enjoyed. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Aries...thank you very much...your warm words are appreciated.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tara...thank you...you are always most gracious with your comments. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Domzi...thank you..yes this does, doesn't it. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry~Very well done as usual! Much enjoyed this one. Sorry if I do not get to them all as I wish, but am fighting a bit of a bout of pneumonia just now. Hugs. Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy...thank you ... hope you get well soon...I am sure the weather does not make it any easier.. |
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