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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-12-10 05:19 PM




Will I ever find the words that heal.
Words that can take away the ache.
Soft wishful whispers to caress
Light touches to help sooth

Lightly I will touch your brow
Letting your heart rest, mind relax.
Long I will stand watch over you.
Keeping ever vigilant of your needs.

The soft beams of a moon touch you.
Calm breezes flow through your hair.
Birds will sing joyful songs to you.
I, your servant, do so humbly serve.

Remember the songs of love and laughter.
Do not let your memory of eyes fade.
Keep your heart filled with true love.
Listen to the distant call of   the night.

The gleam now diminished will return.
Having known pure love, never lost.
A soul alone, will find treasure.
Two hearts apart shall beat again strong.

© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-10 05:26 PM




(sigh) Your hope and compassion for all the lovers of the world echo from your loving heart, dearest friend, it takes a lot of strength and courage, but your heart marches with pure faith! (sigh) Your compassion shines from your golden pen always, your beautiful words never cease to amaze me! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You and have the happiest holidays! You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-10 05:30 PM


*sigh* All the gentle words that come from your heart seem to be soft as whispers. Beautiful writing, Magnus. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-12-10 06:01 PM


very nice, Barry

Kathleen (Kay)
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4 posted 2001-12-10 06:07 PM


Ah, how nice is this. It softly touch my heart.

May love feel your wings, and thy hearts be one again.

~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.
~Just when I thought it is too far away, opportunity knocks the door

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5 posted 2001-12-10 06:15 PM


Magnus,

     Such stunning words.. you put them together well I definately enjoyed.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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6 posted 2001-12-10 06:18 PM


Awww! This poem reminds me of just how much  joy love brings to someone!

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

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7 posted 2001-12-10 07:04 PM


Kay...thank you...sometimes something a
little soothing is in order for many of us.

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8 posted 2001-12-10 07:05 PM


Noah..as always...thanx for your kindness.
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9 posted 2001-12-10 07:06 PM


Thank you Karen...your feelings of my words
mean much to me.  Happy you enjoyed.

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10 posted 2001-12-10 07:06 PM


Aries...thank you very much...your warm words
are appreciated..

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11 posted 2001-12-10 07:07 PM


Tara...thank you...you are always most
gracious with your comments.

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12 posted 2001-12-10 07:08 PM


Domzi...thank you..yes this does, doesn't it.
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13 posted 2001-12-10 07:22 PM


Barry~Very well done as usual!  Much enjoyed this one.  Sorry if I do not get to them all as I wish, but am fighting a bit of a bout of pneumonia just now.  
Hugs. Nancy.  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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14 posted 2001-12-10 07:35 PM


Nancy...thank you ...  hope you get well
soon...I am sure the weather does not make
it any easier..

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