Open Poetry #17 |
My Daughter’s Prayer |
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
My Daughter’s Prayer By Larry Chadwick Every night she knelt beside her bed, My daughter would say her prayer. She prayed for mommy and daddy, And for her brother to learn to share. Then she’d hop under the covers, And daddy would kiss her cheek. “Don’t let the bed bugs bite.” Lights out, I’d take another peek. But after daddy was for sure gone, She would climb back out of bed. Slip to her knees and pray once more, Talking to Jesus this is what she said: “Jesus, my daddy is still in school, The car we drive isn’t very good. So tomorrow when I get out of bed, I want a Firebird with the eagle on the hood.” Now she was only five years old, She knew Jesus answered prayers. It was the same routine every night, And a dash to the door to see if it was there. I know because she confessed to me, The truth of these events this year. So twenty-two years have gone by, And Christmas is drawing near. I’ve already done my holiday shopping, And it has really been so much fun. So it’s wrapped and finally in the box, Off to Fed Ex and my work is done. The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! [This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 12-10-2001).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Well, a real Firebird wouldn't fit in a box, so did you get her a model? Sweet poem, Larry. Sounds like you have a wonderful family. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, Gotta say, if I made lots of money it would be a real one! And thanks, I am so blessed with a wonderful family! The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Aww so precious! You are a great father Larry! Have safe and happy holidays! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
OK, so will a cyber hug make do? Here it is, just for you, my sweet friend. You are the extra lump of sugar in my tea. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
RosePetal, Thanks! And from what I hear you're a pretty special girl too. Kacy, I'll take whatever you're giving. And yup I'll melt in your tea too! Thanks. The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You are more than welcome. But please don't melt in my cup! How will I find you the next day? I want one of those perpetual sugar cubes...I'm sure they must exist somewhere. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, I'm forever sweet! Does that count? Did you hear about Marge's contest being fixed? The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! [This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 12-10-2001).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ah Larry ... a wonderful story, filled with warmth and love! This was so sweet, very much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Thanks Kit! I just learned this story from my daughter and had no idea. The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
A plastic model of one, perhaps? Wow, gotta love a Firebird! Michael Auguste~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Larry--The sweet love shown in this poem of heart, made me smile. Thank you. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Auguste, Your 2000th Post on my poem! Wow! Actually a metal model that the hood and doors open and the wheels turn. But gotta love a Firebird. Martie, Love it is! Thanks. The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Larry,this was so sweet.My son wanted a pt cruiser one time so I bought him a small one. Juanita |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Juanita, Never mind that my daughter was expecting to get the real thing! Fun to have kids with dreams. The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) You are a very loving and beautiful father, sweet Larry, she is so happy and lucky to have you always! (sigh) God Bless you boith, and may your prayers and dreams come true! I wish you both the happiest holidays! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* I love this poem and how your responded to your daughter's prayer. What a delightful man you are. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful story! A firebird, at five even! At five I think I wanted my own room! LoL Thank you for sharing this with us! Cheers! Ter. Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very enjoyable story. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well done, Larry! You are all truly blessed...sincere holiday wishes to you all |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Larry this one was very touching! A lovely holiday post. You are very blessed indeed. Season's Greetings to you and your Nancy Lee. ....and the rest of the pit crew. *Kisses under the mistletoe, Nancy Lee* "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Larry Such a beautiful picture you have painted here through your words. The great love you have for your daughter is so very evident. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Mistletoe Angel, Thanks Noah. You are always so kind. Happy Holidays! Karen, Wish I had known sooner and wish I could have answered it. Oh well... Ter, Me...I just wanted to be married! We're a hopeless lot. LOL Thanks. Sod, Thanks and love the happy face. Micael, You are so right! Thanks and Happy Holidays to you and yours. Nancy Lee, How did I miss the mistle toe? Happy Holidays to all at your house. Sue, Thank you so much. Happy Holidays. The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Larry- Such a sweet story, and you've penned it well. Thanks for sharing this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Vicky, Thanks for stopping by. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WAHH! I wanna FIREBIRD TOO! Actually, a little 4wd anybrandwilldo pickup would be nice about now. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, I'd settle for a new justaboutanything! LOL Rattle and Hum, eh? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes. Rattle and Hum. One of U2's best albums. And what about Keith Jarrett? Concert at Koln? Jarrett is a classical and jazz piano virtuoso. Yep, anewanythingaboutnow. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, What part of the jazz section would I find that in? LOL |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
This is precious! I love your work, Sir. I am many. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Siofra, Thanks! It doesn't seem your passion is suspended. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A very special story, Larry...and very beautifully written. It sounds like your daughter is a very lucky girl...even if the car does fit into a box. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Madame Chipmunk, LOL Thanks, that was fun. By the way, did I tell you I used to live in Michigan? Hope you have snow for Christmas! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a sweet daughter you have there. You'll have to let us know what she says when she opens it. I bet it brings a tear to someone, and probably both of you. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Larry, I loved this! I have heard some GOOD prayers as the 5 kids were growing up. Sometimes I really wanted to "help" God and answer faster, but He seemed to know what He was doing. I know she will love the gift no matter what it is. What memories you have brought back. Hugs, ME |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Tracey, Thanks Trace and a report you shall get! Mother Earth, Aren't kids just the best. Wish I'd had more like you... |
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