Whispering Hearts In Moonlight's Cover (my 200th post and Duet with Moonlight Romeo)

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Siofra

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since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

0 posted 2001-12-10 12:37 PM

Can you hear the tender sighs
of night time's unruly breath?
Can you see my love for you
withstands a greater test?

Life has brought us together
In love's perfect union
For a purpose far greater than we know
We only have to follow and love one another

Did you know we're meant to happen
two hearts together offered
standing against our doubts
Arms of fate, our chosen cover?

All I know is what's in my heart
The call of your heart's voice
Calling over dreams of youth now found again
To the heart that you've always wanted

Then hear my voice above it all
reaching for fingers and hands.
I'm standing here just dreaming you
You're all my need demands.

You're the dream of my life
One I thought would never come true
And now that you're here
I'll always be in your heart

And I will move in yours, dear man
just whispering here tonight
Thinking of our hands
meeting one day in the light.

I am many.

[This message has been edited by Siofra (edited 12-10-2001).]

icequeen
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since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

1 posted 2001-12-10 12:56 PM

ahhhhh..... Brava!!

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

2 posted 2001-12-10 12:59 PM

Love the theme and rhythem of the words.

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-12-10 01:10 AM

I love it! And that moon shot? Perfect.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2001-12-10 01:45 AM

What a spectacular collaboration you two! Excellent job and congratulations on your 200th post as well. I enjoyed this very much!

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2001-12-10 01:49 AM

CONGRATS! and this is lovely you two! great work! You write well together

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2001-12-10 02:13 AM

Siofra - a most beautiful writing with another. How I miss writing with someone. A'hh, I do remember some of them... Need to do it again...

BC

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

7 posted 2001-12-10 04:02 AM

I'd like to thank everyone for their responses so far. Moonlight Romeo is a wonderful poet. This is my second time writing with him, and it has been an honor to have him share my 200th post with me.

I am many.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-12-10 05:08 AM

Lovely writing...wonder how you get all those hearts in your poem...James

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

9 posted 2001-12-10 06:41 AM

A lovely collaboration Siofra and Moonlight Romeo! I love to read the duets of poets in mirrored thought. Very nicely done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Moonlight Romeo

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

10 posted 2001-12-11 02:20 PM

The honor is all mine Siofra. Thank you for letting me write with you. We should do it again, soon.

Thanks to all you that have replied as well.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

11 posted 2001-12-11 11:33 PM

How everyone wishes for that, me included...you said it perfectly, my friend.

Hugs!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

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