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{{{Within my own name}}}
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{{{Within my own name}}} |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~*~ Within my own Name ~*~ I want to draw you again and again within the letters of my own name How it can ever be? Hush, now... and let me solve the mystery ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ PS. A quick write. I might be able to develop it later on...who knows! I hope you'd enjoy it nonetheless. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Interesting..I definetly think there should be more though. I am intrigued.  Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
I hope you do add to this, it is a very good way to catch us though Hats off!   Intrigued! Ter. Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Melody, I think it says much as is. If you want it to look complete, maybe adjust it into a senryu form. Have a good day. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful! (sigh) How beautiful it must feel to feel a loved ones come together in your own name! (sigh) Only the heart can tell how! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it the way it is! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Perhaps you'll be able to draw the outline of a shadow, for some key letters remain elusive... -MVS "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Temptress~ Honestly,I don't know if my muse would pick up its pace again and try to complete this piece...I hope I will.... Thank you for the wonderful encouragement ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Ter.~ Thank you and I hope I'd do that too...wish me luck.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Sandra~ So you think I shouldn't try to squeeze my muse a bit ? I appreciate your advice and perhaps it's time to try with senryus.. Thank you dearest... And a good day to you too... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Noah~ Thank you soooooo much sweet friend. I'm happy that you love it the way it is.....  Love & warm wishes ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Mark~ Only the outline of a shadow?!  Perhaps I'm hoping for more than that.... And yes...some letters "remain elusive"...to get us more intrigued, I guess. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 12-10-2001).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hmmmm, a lot could be made of this one.. I am waiting to see.. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'd like to see what you can find within your own name. . . for this is indeed much. . . I'll be back. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Definetly potential for more here, although it is intriguing all on its own. Makes me think. I am many. |
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