Open Poetry #17 |
Writing with a Friend |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Here I sat with my raven friend, Morose poet with time to spend, Before a glowing light my beacon in the night, That draws me down and draws me in, Sadness consuming not to end, Never to knowing bright my darkness is my sight. Feathers not fluttered staying still, Taxidermist left you your chill, But you give Poe’s sight and allow poetry’s flight, Sit there my cold stiff raven friend, Inspire my dismal poem’s bend Gloom |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Your poetry may be usually sad, but it has a beautiful feel to it that I cannot explain. This just touches a sadness buried somewhere within me, my friend. I love your work. *jennifer* Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Professor Gloom This was wonderful.......I loved it. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Thank you, Temptress, I am pleased you like my writing And tolerate their sad nature enough to read. Thank you, Suetang, Glad you enjoyed. Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Funny but your poetry makes me want to reach out, touch you and make you smile for one more day... may I? ((hugssss)) to you Professor G ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Undoubted reason the raven sits to gift your pen awesome wit to room with gloom that which be read thank goodness for day and not night's bed... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Raven muse so stiff and cold helps you write with pen so bold. From the darkness outside you shall not hide, for it flows from this quill for eager souls who await on windowsill. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 11-23-2001).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
This is darkly...comical...It reminds me of the Lady in Chevy Chase's movie that wrote with the stuffed squirrel. She did well. You do well. I'm thinking what I can stuff. LOL! Your friend is very interesting! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Someone once said, "The only good bird is a dead bird". I'm hoping it's not true, for virtual personal reasons. All kidding aside, friends of the avian persuasion have provided many an inspiration for poetry. I'm enjoying your insight, Prof. |
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