Open Poetry #17 |
Pleasure Me |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Pleasure me as I treasure every word. Take me into your arms, making me sigh Give me the thoughts only we two have heard As we climb and peak in ecstacy high. Let my arms hold you ever closely when our rapture turns skin into bumps of flesh as we partake love within our minds then settle into slumber till again fresh. I will take you to the edge of your soul and turn your mind into a mush of joy as we join in passion while two bells toll and our fingers over flesh do now ploy. Listen to two hearts as passions do build for it is each of us who are now thrilled. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
STANDING OVATION!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS SONNET IS SOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL!!! (smiles) Love always shines from your golden heart! She is very lucky, sweet friend, may true love always blossom in your heart and bring pleasure and joy to you! (sigh) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oooohh sooo sensual Magnus! You are the king of romance! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
my goodness, you certainly are in the holiday spirit aren't you this is wonderful! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I am sure she will. Filled with passionate romance as only you can write it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Magnus, Oooo I like this one Wonderful sonnet! You make it look so easy. Well done Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is great, wish I was so inspired.. Sandra |
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