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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-12-09 07:28 PM


Pleasure me as I treasure every word.
Take me into your arms, making me sigh
Give me the thoughts only we two have heard
As we climb and peak in ecstacy high.

Let my arms hold you ever closely when
our rapture turns skin into bumps of flesh
as we partake  love within our minds then
settle into slumber till  again fresh.

I will take you to the edge of your soul
and turn your mind into a mush of joy
as we join in passion while two bells toll
and our fingers over flesh do now ploy.

Listen to two hearts as passions do build
for it is each of us who are now thrilled.

© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-09 07:42 PM




STANDING OVATION!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS SONNET IS SOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL!!! (smiles) Love always shines from your golden heart! She is very lucky, sweet friend, may true love always blossom in your heart and bring pleasure and joy to you! (sigh) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



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2 posted 2001-12-09 07:43 PM


Oooohh sooo sensual Magnus! You are the king of romance!

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-12-09 07:47 PM


my goodness, you certainly are in the holiday spirit aren't you  
this is wonderful!

Kathleen (Kay)
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4 posted 2001-12-09 08:15 PM


*sigh* I am sure she will. Filled with passionate romance as only you can write it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2001-12-09 09:30 PM


Magnus,

      Oooo I like this one   Wonderful sonnet! You make it look so easy.  Well done  

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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6 posted 2001-12-09 09:33 PM


This is great, wish I was so inspired..
Sandra

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