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Eyes Raining Tears
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Eyes Raining Tears |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Eyes Raining Tears My sight is blurred as feelings heard Such heartfelt loss fills every word My heart constricts to see your pain Wishing to heal for love again Rivers run free from heart and soul Feeling helpless to give console Your pain I feel within my breast Eyes raining tears praying what's best Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Karen - another most telling writing you have written. A soft word from me to you, for one of tears... BC |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
**hugs** you have no idea how much that means to me, right now. **hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggssssss) Such compassion fills these soft sad but beautiful words! (sigh) May these tears of sadness become tears of golden hope! (sigh) Soooooo touching! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen, Nothing beats a friend who can see our pain. Nice write.  The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
*wipes Karen's tears away* Just remember sweetie, that something postive always comes out of something negative! **Hugs**  RP |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Karen....Another lovely yet sad write. ~hugs from me to you, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Another great one, Karen.... I don't know what inspired it...but I certainly hope everything is better now... Poetry is the best therapy I know of...  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen, Your words touch my heart deeply...Know that you will always have a friend..A friend who will listen, and care.. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Karen, I do like your writing. You emotions always come across so painfully clear. I hope everything is ok with you. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is beautiful. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You have such a compassionate heart, Karen, this is beautiful. Kathleen (Kay) |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Such a heartfelt beautiful write... thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Karen, your emotions come through on this beautiful write. Hope all is well. |
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