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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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is the beginning like the end? or, is it the other way around? and, when we reach the end, is it a new beginning? or, are endings just put there to mark the spaces of our lives? double bars at the end of the music before we turn the page to begin the next movement? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
prelude to all the beauty.......your words are a prelude to the joy I feel when reading such talent as you possess. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I would think..the next movement..yes. I LOVE the way you present your thoughts here, Sweet Sven Pen!  Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Very nice! I hope and pray the end is only the new beginning. As always I like the way you think. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Every end is a new beginning, and every prelude is a harbinger to another! (smiles) Your beautiful heart shines with so many soft expressions of love and wisdom through time! (smiles) BRAVO!!! I love it!!! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is not the end. It is not even the beginning of the end. But it is, perhaps, the end of the beginning. But is not the Prelude the beginning...? Love the way you think Sven..... And the way you make me think!! Wonderful write! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sven, This was enjoyed  Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sometimes, we just don't know. I think what we think is an end, can be a new beginning in disguise. Just my opinion I guess. Good write, Sven. All writing comes |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Hmmmm....you're making me stop and think Sven!!! Quite reflective little piece!!! Interesting thought!!!!! Bridgette |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ah... yes of course...! We need a :confusion: smiley, don't we? Sven, this is a nice short piece... quite deep. Is it about reincarnation? A repetitive process as opposed to a continuous re-creation into a new world? I suppose it's all lost on me... non-spiritualist that I am... But still, a rather deep poem. You might have written it even longer, you know... added many more points of view or options to this almost unanswerable philosophy. If you decide to do that, then good luck with it... and if not, don't sweat it. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Hmmmmmmmmm..... Now, that one makes a girl think !!! very wonderfully penned! ~timotyhsangel  Dont let it end like this, tell them I said something. ~Pancho Villa |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
quite nice. i agree with your sentiments expressed. and, for me, i choose to believe the ends mark the beginning of something new. i had to read this, for my dear favorite poet ever always wrote a poem called "prelude" to front each of his books of poetry. somehow he managed to embody the idea and feeling of his book of poems in his "prelude" poems. he also liked to write "l'envoi" poems as the final poem in his books. quite an interesting tactic. one i think i shall adopt when my time comes to publish. thank you for this thought provoking read. WARNING: this reader is not prone to terse, canned comments. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, thought provoking as usual. Is it the beginning of the end or the end of the beginning and if life comes full circle, how do we discern the end from the beginning. ( Zen Philosophy 101)...That means I just made it up. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
AD dearest heart, wonderful writing and such a thought provoking piece. Well, I believe that it's not in our destiny to know the answers to these great questions. Not until HE ordains it so. By which time it won't matter. Truly outstanding work my friend  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
how beautifully said, I like the depth within very much....thanks for sharing your wonderful thoughts. Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I think ends are beginnings in disguise. Only they are so very well disguised at times, it is hard to tell. Very good write. Sandra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - you are a most talented writer. Always enjoy them, my friend... BC |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thanks to all of you. . . yes, this is very thought provoking isn't it?? and, like a "prelude", it's not that long. . . just a short thought to get your brains going. . . thanks again everyone. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I have to believe it is a prelude showing the wonder of things to come!!!!! Beautiful and thought provoking Sven  Isis *~ Love and Compassion are the moral fabric of world peace. ~* |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
mmm.....yes indeed... Who would ever know where does it begin or where it ends..? Such a though provoking read indeed.. Thank you dear friend ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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