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Saunni
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0 posted 2001-12-09 01:56 PM



Between The Blue Moons

It takes bright white and surrounded in the purity of it
To even seek what you think may never even exist
But, if you walk just a few tiny steps along the path in that state
You'll find something in amazing and way too hard to resist...

The blue moons are a sense of what rare can be
It's a way of being where nothing is familiar at all
But, isn't that what we are as unique keeps guiding our hand?
Yet, we're solid in the faith not bound by any walls...

Like it's difference between the gold and the cobalt blue
Only shows me the amount of trust I have in you
For I can be and I am where your footprints reside
Just mine are in their own mold just slightly behind...

Too many to count in that plain but look down and see
You'll view mine were never within any distance of yours
So, now that we've reached the space between the blue moons
Let's stand here and inhale the miles we've worked so hard for...

If you'll look you'll see I no longer wear that tarnished look
For I am able to capture the new and throw out the old, too
You've never allowed me to feel any less then any one of those stars
It's such a cry at night no one can hear but you...

Between the blue moons meant for the rare and the open to find
So very meant for the most curious and creative minds
Those blue moons aren't as far as they seem to appear
For it's a given, you and I, can surely survive here...
*Sauni*
@~~>~~>

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

© Copyright 2001 Saundra - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2001-12-09 02:05 PM






(big hugggsssssss) Oh Saunni, again your angelic hearts touch my heart so deeply! (smiles) Your beautiful heart always build castles in the sky and have blue moons glow like sapphires! (smiles) We all can survive there, for imagination and creativity is endless, as is the love in your golden loving heart! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet Saunni, I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-09 05:30 PM


Very impressive write, much enjoyed this. Lots of undercurrents within.
Sandra

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3 posted 2001-12-09 06:57 PM


this is the place to be. . . beyond the blue. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2001-12-09 07:11 PM


Saunni - what a compelling writing. Every word has meaning. I can't say enough about this writing...

BC

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