Open Poetry #17 |
Between The Blue Moons |
Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Between The Blue Moons It takes bright white and surrounded in the purity of it To even seek what you think may never even exist But, if you walk just a few tiny steps along the path in that state You'll find something in amazing and way too hard to resist... The blue moons are a sense of what rare can be It's a way of being where nothing is familiar at all But, isn't that what we are as unique keeps guiding our hand? Yet, we're solid in the faith not bound by any walls... Like it's difference between the gold and the cobalt blue Only shows me the amount of trust I have in you For I can be and I am where your footprints reside Just mine are in their own mold just slightly behind... Too many to count in that plain but look down and see You'll view mine were never within any distance of yours So, now that we've reached the space between the blue moons Let's stand here and inhale the miles we've worked so hard for... If you'll look you'll see I no longer wear that tarnished look For I am able to capture the new and throw out the old, too You've never allowed me to feel any less then any one of those stars It's such a cry at night no one can hear but you... Between the blue moons meant for the rare and the open to find So very meant for the most curious and creative minds Those blue moons aren't as far as they seem to appear For it's a given, you and I, can surely survive here... *Sauni* @~~>~~> Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Saunni, again your angelic hearts touch my heart so deeply! (smiles) Your beautiful heart always build castles in the sky and have blue moons glow like sapphires! (smiles) We all can survive there, for imagination and creativity is endless, as is the love in your golden loving heart! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet Saunni, I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very impressive write, much enjoyed this. Lots of undercurrents within. Sandra [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 12-09-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is the place to be. . . beyond the blue. . . wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Saunni - what a compelling writing. Every word has meaning. I can't say enough about this writing... BC |
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