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Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-12-09 06:36 AM


How quickly love comes and goes
often leaving before we are ready to let it go
Love is like a handful of sand
The tighter you try to hold it in your hand
the faster it escapes through your fingers
until it is no more

Our love is now all but gone
lost at sea
taken with the wind
I wonder whether a new love will come my way
on the incoming tide
or on the warm Summer's breeze
A love so magical that it will
warm my soul and fill my heart with love

Here I now sit
staring out through the rainsoaked window
reminiscing about my lost love
and remembering all the wonderful times spent here
So much love and passion once filled this place
but now it feels so empty like my heart

When the rains clear
and I catch sight of the rainbow
I will make a wish for a new love to come my way
I'll imagine walks along the beach hand in hand
long passionate kisses at sunset
and making love in front of the roaring fire
And I'll hear the words 'I love you'
ringing in my ears once more

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-12-09 06:40 AM


I wonder whether a new love will come my way
on the incoming tide
or on the warm Summer's breeze
A love so magical that it will
warm my soul and fill my heart with love..

this happened to me, not too long ago... thought it would last, hoped it would...should have just enjoyed what I had, while Ihad it, instead of wanting it to last. *s

I hope you have your wishes come true.
hugss
~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-12-09 08:22 AM


You said a lot there...James
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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
3 posted 2001-12-09 02:11 PM




(smiles) And you will, sweet friend, and your heart will eternally beat against the man that will give you eternal true love! (sigh) So sad but beautiful, sweet Sue, I know with all my heart that you will love again and you will be very happy ever after! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

amusemi
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
4 posted 2001-12-09 02:24 PM


What a beautiful place.  Hope.  Sometimes it is all we have in this world.

I really like this...it's beautiful.

sodpossom
Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723
N.C
5 posted 2001-12-09 02:24 PM


Very beautiful!Maybe someday.

Stevie

"In all things tried,you did the best you could do"

LadySofia
Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238
FL., USA
6 posted 2001-12-09 03:16 PM


Love's long lost shores...it must have been a wonderful flame to spark such inspiration!

^_^ LadySofia

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2001-12-09 06:31 PM


Suetang - this has to be one of the most tender writings I have read in a long time. This is a definite keeper.

Our love is now all but gone
lost at sea
taken with the wind
I wonder whether a new love will come my way
on the incoming tide
or on the warm Summer's breeze
A love so magical that it will
warm my soul and fill my heart with love

This verse touches me very deeply, just expressed with love, and from a very warm heart...

BC

Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
8 posted 2001-12-09 06:33 PM


*sigh* a beautiful and romantic poem that touches the heart and soul. For me it is safer to love the phantom of my dreams. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
9 posted 2001-12-09 07:13 PM


nakdthoughts
Thank you for your thoughts and I hope a special love comes your way.

JamesMichael
Thank you for reading this one.

Noah
How can I thank you enough?? You are always so generous with your comments which always brighten my day.

amusemi
Thank you for your lovely comment.


sodpossom
It's nice to live in hope.

Lady Sofia
Yes, it was a very special love.

Bill
How very humbled am I by your lovely words.

Karen
As always I am so very grateful for your comments.

Take care.......Sue

Suetang

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