Open Poetry #17 |
Waiting For A New Love |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
How quickly love comes and goes often leaving before we are ready to let it go Love is like a handful of sand The tighter you try to hold it in your hand the faster it escapes through your fingers until it is no more Our love is now all but gone lost at sea taken with the wind I wonder whether a new love will come my way on the incoming tide or on the warm Summer's breeze A love so magical that it will warm my soul and fill my heart with love Here I now sit staring out through the rainsoaked window reminiscing about my lost love and remembering all the wonderful times spent here So much love and passion once filled this place but now it feels so empty like my heart When the rains clear and I catch sight of the rainbow I will make a wish for a new love to come my way I'll imagine walks along the beach hand in hand long passionate kisses at sunset and making love in front of the roaring fire And I'll hear the words 'I love you' ringing in my ears once more Suetang |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I wonder whether a new love will come my way on the incoming tide or on the warm Summer's breeze A love so magical that it will warm my soul and fill my heart with love.. this happened to me, not too long ago... thought it would last, hoped it would...should have just enjoyed what I had, while Ihad it, instead of wanting it to last. *s I hope you have your wishes come true. hugss ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You said a lot there...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) And you will, sweet friend, and your heart will eternally beat against the man that will give you eternal true love! (sigh) So sad but beautiful, sweet Sue, I know with all my heart that you will love again and you will be very happy ever after! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
What a beautiful place. Hope. Sometimes it is all we have in this world. I really like this...it's beautiful. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very beautiful!Maybe someday. Stevie |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
Love's long lost shores...it must have been a wonderful flame to spark such inspiration! ^_^ LadySofia |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - this has to be one of the most tender writings I have read in a long time. This is a definite keeper. Our love is now all but gone lost at sea taken with the wind I wonder whether a new love will come my way on the incoming tide or on the warm Summer's breeze A love so magical that it will warm my soul and fill my heart with love This verse touches me very deeply, just expressed with love, and from a very warm heart... BC |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* a beautiful and romantic poem that touches the heart and soul. For me it is safer to love the phantom of my dreams. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
nakdthoughts Thank you for your thoughts and I hope a special love comes your way. JamesMichael Thank you for reading this one. Noah How can I thank you enough?? You are always so generous with your comments which always brighten my day. amusemi Thank you for your lovely comment. sodpossom It's nice to live in hope. Lady Sofia Yes, it was a very special love. Bill How very humbled am I by your lovely words. Karen As always I am so very grateful for your comments. Take care.......Sue Suetang |
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