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0 posted 2001-12-09 12:56 PM


Moonset

Amid streaming cloudscapes floats directive moon;
Like a feather falling drifts perfective moon.

Soundless autumn winds soft rustle unseen leaves
Of trees in silhouette of projective moon.

Shifting slow and silent in the depths of night
Sift clouds hemmed in radiance of reflective moon.

Faint through broken shroud flicker delicate beams
As in gentle descent falls respective moon.

Upon horizon vast a cloud dragon flies,
Final hues reflecting from prospective moon.

In still serene amazement watches Zahaar
Wondrous shimmering moods of affective moon.

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1 posted 2001-12-09 01:15 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this lovely vision had me daydreaming, it's so lovely! (smiles) I saw myself soaring in the moonlight with clouds of dragonflies! (sigh) I love it, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet Erin! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Erin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-09 08:30 PM


a distant planet calls. . . where the moon is like the sun. . .and where Zaarhar lives and moves with it. . .

I like this. . . there's a quiet quality to it. . .it's another world. . . one that I'm sure many would like to come back to. . .

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3 posted 2001-12-09 10:24 PM


*sigh* Your images..and the feeling in this all combine to form a wonderful place in my mind. I love this!

I am many.

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4 posted 2001-12-09 10:48 PM


I like this very much   extremely pretty writing  
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