Open Poetry #17 |
Seeking Wisdom |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Seeking Wisdom I looked into the eye of wisdom trying not to blink Nor to divulge with yearning, questions posed upon the brink Her pupils smiled back at me Through deepness of their pools As if to say, you know by now It’s life that teaches fools I tried to hide embarrassment That she would surely think I were a fool, but as she turned She gave a little wink Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 12-09-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Elizabeth, we all love you so very much! Wisdom shines in your words, for more of what we see is how we understand the world! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, and I am always so lucky and happy to read the words your golden heart shares! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Liz, I still await the wisdom that the years are supposed to bring. Nicely done and I especially liked the wink. Nice touch! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sometimes we already know the answers but need to be reminded where to look for them. Well done my friend. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very well done!Nice message! Stevie |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
There is wisdom in this poem...you convey this message quite clearly. The verses were clear and uncluttered. Good read! ^_^ LadySofia |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
like it......you captured wisdom with a wink.... Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I always wondered the gender of wisdom. Now I know |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you all for your kind remarks. And incidentally, Interloper "Here's winking at you" Liz |
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