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Open Poetry #17

Timed test

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-12-09 06:02 AM

blindly
    I have
        walked
           through time

a stranger
    to a
       life
         suppose
            to be
              mine

another
    place
       an uninvited
           guest

who
    was the
       failure
          at this
             test

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-12-09 08:02 AM

I Slick Lady,
this was one slick poem...it rolled off the tongue like satin, and I liked the format it gave me a sense of the ocean rolling in
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

2 posted 2001-12-10 01:23 AM

h,
it may
  appear
    when you
      are tested

that you'll
  walk away
    and think
      you're bested

but I'll
  suggest
    a life
      examined

is where
  you'll find
    your dreams
      relanded

e

[This message has been edited by Krawdad (edited 12-10-2001).]

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

3 posted 2001-12-10 04:32 AM

I understand this, Lady!

Enjoyed!

I am many.

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