Open Poetry #17 |
A Blue Poet’s Pride |
D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
It is in good writing that I become ecstatic, for it makes my inner self glow with pride. I grow tired inside and weep For the slimmest chances seem to be darkening That a magic dart of light Of inspiration will make it beyond me Into the world of pleasures For as I make more More is drained out of me And all my fantasies evaporate Into mists of doom For it seems the harder I try, the less gets done And in the strength of one man The dreams cannot extend Into the mind of others who feel a heart As the virus in the email someone sent me Spreads out from me It chokes me much like live does now My time has come to fly But the doubt off others have kept me grounded So I am left there limping for hope That my words will reach beyond me and fly Right now it is not the money but the pride That is running amok within me And as all the carpetbaggers are reaching for me The bills of doom are approaching They Chase me from the Citi of hope For their interest is not mine And as they pile it on The less I have to give from both ends But need not worry for I will take care Of my frustration By putting my life’s interest on theirs To reduce it to zero And as the government gets a surplus in fees I will sing a song as I rip up the plastic And as they plead their way back Their failings of them to help last Will now let them cease in me Yes, gloom I write today In the blues of those other cities That feels there way into a sad smile with hope And even with this tone A poet dreams Where there are emotions so cold That the words make them hot The dreamers of life will still seek The simple pleasures in their pride D.Lester Young (11/28/01) I feel better now Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Yes, even in the gloomiest of times, the heart can glow with pride! (smiles) May we all seek joy from the simplest pleasures of life and into our dreams associate the light! (sigh) Wisdom shines in every word, sweet friend, you sure are prolific tonight! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* you weave magic in your words filled with the flight of dreams and transport me to a dreamer's world. I love it. **hugs**and a if you are a man. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh I know this pride ...I have to confess.....you penned it well I'd say!!!! Bridgette |
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