Open Poetry #17 |
Marge’s Challenge - Take Me Back To Yesterday |
2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Take Me Back To Yesterday When I didn’t have much to do I could spend hours following an ant Or watch a flower sparkle with dew. Take Me Back To Yesterday To Mom’s oatmeal cookies in a Baker’s Dozen Or count How Many Shades Of Green in clover And just play chase with my cousin Take Me Back To Yesterday When I could hear the Whispers of Dawn Across A Field Of Lilacs Spread When childhood memories were fun Take Me Back To Yesterday When Sunlight Falls to night To the care free days of play When things were still just right. Take Me Back To Yesterday Reminiscing the days of the past Take Me Back To Yesterday I pray that my memories will last. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
yea.. those childhood memories... how they used to be fun.. i think they still CAN be fun!! we just need someone to take us back to yesterday! |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Thanx for taking me back to yesterday! Challenge perfectly met! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet Melton! (sigh) Your beautiful memories and love shines in these wonderful words! (sigh) BRAVO!!! I love it!!! We all love you so very much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melton, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This is wonderful, such imaginary in your words Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Heck I have a hard time remember an hour ago. Very nicely done. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
EagleScorpion… Things were simpler, then. Thanks for reading. RosePetal… You’re welcome. It was fun. Mistletoe Angel… Thank you Noah for taking the time to go back to a time without stress. Titia… Thanks. I’m glad Marge provided an outlet for the long forgotten memerios. inot2B… Hey! You’ll remember if you try. Thanks. Melton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melton~ A *hug* for these lovely memories shared~ I'm pleased to have 'inspired' any part of this beauty~ Thank you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully done, Melton...a lovely trip down memory lane :spinning: copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A wonderful trip down memory lane indeed Melton! Thank you for the journey ... and may our memories last forever ... much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Marge... Thank you. You are the queen of inspiration. Madame C... Thanks. Welcome to PIP. A lot of memories are shared here. Melton |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Kit... Thank you for reading. We need a calm thought every so often. Melton |
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