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Sweet Love Senryu
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Sweet Love Senryu |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Silk Senryus By: Noah Eaton 12/7/01 Silk Stockings She wears silk stockings Her legs as soft as cashmere Soft in loves caress Honeybees You swarm around me Like a cloud of honeybees Kissing me in glee Dancing On The Moon Dancing on the moon Treading Cassiopia Softly in your arms |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Beautiful visions in these Senryu, Noah. Well done. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
This explains so vividly the happiness you possess. Keep being the way you are, man. Many blessings to you for a long and prosperous life. Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Stunning Noah. Lovely senryus On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Noah! These are beautifully done. You did a great job with them.  |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
These make me sigh ... such soft, wonderous beauty in every word. ~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Your pretty romantic yourself there big guy! I love this!! Kathleen (Kay) |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
So very gorgeous! You do these so well, I learned from the best (YOU) <3<3<3LOVE YOU<3<3<3 |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Beautiful images.Loved it! Stevie |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Even more to be desired than silk stockings...silky skin and silky hair...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Noah! You paint beautiful pictures! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
wow! beautiful images in my mind as I read your words. Very well done! Ter.  [This message has been edited by Rogue24 (edited 12-08-2001).] |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I was wondering what a senryu was. You illustrated it so well. Thank you. Nan |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah, Beauuutiful  These were greatly enjoyed You express the romance in your heart sooo well Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wow Noah, those were awesome, just awesome! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
You make it seem easy Noah Very nicely done |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Lovely senryu Noah, keep the love flowing and your mind open, and good things will happen for you. I wish I could write at the ability you can. Another good piece as always Noah! From your good friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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