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0 posted 2001-12-07 10:45 PM



Silk Senryus
By: Noah Eaton
12/7/01


Silk Stockings

She wears silk stockings
Her legs as soft as cashmere
Soft in loves caress


Honeybees

You swarm around me
Like a cloud of honeybees
Kissing me in glee


Dancing On The Moon

Dancing on the moon
Treading Cassiopia
Softly in your arms

© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-07 10:49 PM


Beautiful visions in these Senryu, Noah. Well done. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-12-07 10:59 PM


This explains so vividly the happiness you possess. Keep being the way you are, man. Many blessings to you for a long and prosperous life.

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

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3 posted 2001-12-07 11:48 PM


Stunning Noah.  Lovely senryus

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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4 posted 2001-12-08 10:10 AM


Noah! These are beautifully done. You did a great job with them.    
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5 posted 2001-12-08 12:38 PM


These make me sigh ... such soft, wonderous beauty in every word.    

~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~

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6 posted 2001-12-08 01:09 PM


Your pretty romantic yourself there big guy!
I love this!!

Kathleen (Kay)
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7 posted 2001-12-08 01:19 PM


So very gorgeous! You do these so well, I learned from the best (YOU)

<3<3<3LOVE YOU<3<3<3

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8 posted 2001-12-08 02:38 PM


Beautiful images.Loved it!

Stevie

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9 posted 2001-12-08 03:00 PM


Even more to be desired than silk stockings...silky skin and silky hair...James
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10 posted 2001-12-08 04:27 PM


Well done Noah!  You paint beautiful pictures!  ~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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11 posted 2001-12-08 05:46 PM


wow! beautiful images in my mind as I read your words. Very well done!

Ter.  

[This message has been edited by Rogue24 (edited 12-08-2001).]

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12 posted 2001-12-08 05:51 PM


I was wondering what a senryu was. You illustrated it so well. Thank you.

Nan

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13 posted 2001-12-08 06:18 PM


Noah,

     Beauuutiful   These were greatly enjoyed You express the romance in your heart sooo well  

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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14 posted 2001-12-08 06:32 PM


Wow Noah, those were awesome, just awesome!  
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15 posted 2001-12-08 06:39 PM


You make it seem easy Noah
Very nicely done

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16 posted 2001-12-09 02:51 AM


Lovely senryu Noah, keep the love flowing and your mind open, and good things will happen for you.  I wish I could write at the ability you can.  Another good piece as always Noah!

     From your good friend
         Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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