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Storm's Reflection
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Storm's Reflection |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Storms Reflection The sky is black as ink, heavy laden with power waiting to be released Lightning streaks across the darkness leaving a trail of brilliance that cannot be captured by word or paint Thunder rolls gaining in power with sounds that vibrate off the soul as we await the full fury of the storm Again lightning leaves its jagged mark across the sky to reveal the forms of a man and woman standing protected from the storm The woman’s eyes flash with passion as they reflect the brilliance of the lightning flash Shadow and light are reflected off this pair as they approach almost touching as another power prepares for release The woman’s form reflects the lightning as she blends her spirit with it to face the power of thunder reflected in this man The passion of the storm courses through them as they embrace and give themselves up to the power of the storm flashing and pounding around them Lightning and thunder matched in the perfect pairing of man and woman made one As the storm reaches it’s height so too do these two reach the pinnacle of passion born of love eternal Softly, gently the world around them returns to quiet serenity as they too return to earth Wrapped safely in each other’s arms their bodies aglow with a love that is reflected in the skies as brilliant color breaks through to paint the skies Karen Torbiak© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
   WOWOWOWOW!! You are so good at this!!  [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 12-03-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
You are just too cute, sweet Balladeer.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*WOW* what a reflections......and it seems that Balladeer have the remote control of the lightning..... Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Holy jumping lightning bolts! Look at him! Well you can't write a serious lightning poem without that little "drip" coming out of the shadows, LOL I am just kidding of course. This was great Karen.~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Karen,talk about great this is it!      Juanita |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! This is great, StarTime. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Whoa, now this is a hot poem for a cold, stormy night! Corinne |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You ether have the best imagination, or the most fantastic love life I have ever seen! Sandra |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
I am leaving to check out the weather channel and find out when the next storm is....This poem will put visions in my head now every time it thunders *S* Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I love lightening and thunder but never thought of it like that....quite imaginative. Bridgette |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
You got all the emotions to thunder at the right time in the words of a true artist. |
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