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JamesBowie
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big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2001-12-07 10:19 PM


As I touched the face
she had passed between
but it was not despair
as I knelt in the grass
head against the stone
my breath
passing
in soft memory

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EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2001-12-07 10:23 PM


this is so gently touching and full of meaning. Good things always come in small packages! Keep up the good work.
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-12-07 10:23 PM




(sigh) Such yearning and serenity fills this emotional piece! (sigh) I pray she will pass softly into your heart and love will forever shine in you! (sigh) BRAVO!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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Canada
3 posted 2001-12-07 10:24 PM


*sigh* heartbreakingly beautiful. How does one respond to such a masterpiece of the heart? **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-12-07 10:42 PM


Very very nicely done.  ~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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