Open Poetry #17 |
Bygone |
JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
As I touched the face she had passed between but it was not despair as I knelt in the grass head against the stone my breath passing in soft memory |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
this is so gently touching and full of meaning. Good things always come in small packages! Keep up the good work. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Such yearning and serenity fills this emotional piece! (sigh) I pray she will pass softly into your heart and love will forever shine in you! (sigh) BRAVO!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* heartbreakingly beautiful. How does one respond to such a masterpiece of the heart? **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nicely done. ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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