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And love disappears by dawn
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And love disappears by dawn |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
In the night when love becomes her she searches for the right guy She stumbles into love making wrong choices that at the moment feel right Only love can keep her afloat And whenever she thinks that she has found love it disappears by dawn |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* love is so strong it can easily last beyond the dawn. We can survive without love but it must be true love to feed our hearts and souls the way we desire. Powerful poem with very deep emotions. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sad sigh) Oh Walker, I know this feeling ever so much too, where I feel I finally have my dream love in my arms, then she disappears when I realize it was all just a dream. (sad sigh) So sad but beautiful, sweet Walker, may love come to her heart and fill her heart with happiness! (sigh) You are soooooo romantic, sweet Walker! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oh yes, I've made so many wrong choices that felt right at the time! I'm young and still learning!! Good Write Walker! Oooh lookie, you are the winner of my 999th post!!! |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
So much truth in this one.Well done! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Damned good one, walker. |
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