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Sentimental Shakedown - Marge's challenge for Balladeer
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Sentimental Shakedown - Marge's challenge for Balladeer |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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S entimental Shakedown E very time I think of SPAM N ever knew what't was before T ill I learned from Balladeer I n his poems he often mentioned M eals of SPAM and Vienna's long E ndless phrases of enjoyment N ever ceased to nag Long John T ales of life that touched my heart A nchering deep into my soul L ovely man but he'll give me...a S entimental Shakedown H ear the rythem in his poems A lways flowing like a river K issing ladies with a smilie E very page of blue he roams D o you feel the same my dear O h my goodness keep it quiet W hisper it softly into my ear N ever let it be known to...Balladeer A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Want to use the pics on my website? Just let me know. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 12-06-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Titia, I won't tell Balladeer, but I'll just bet he finds this fantastic poem! This is great and you met Marge's challenge very well! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is great, Titia, you have such a kind, loving heart! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Wonder if he's heard of the new turkey Spam...think he'll have it on Christmas? Fun write, Titia. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Fun poem Titia. But you'll live longer and healthier without Spam.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ You are just the GREATEST ~ An acrostic 'shakedown' for the sweetest fellow we could know~  He will LOVE it~ Oh, Balladeer ... we're calling yooooouuuuuu ~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Perhaps if we keep this at the top he'll find his early Saturday morning smile! Well done, Titia! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Titia, Well done I'm sure he'll enjoy it. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Titia, thank you for sending me the link - I wish everyone in here would do that (so much easier), and I enjoyed this so much as will Michael. Good job! ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thanks sweet friends, and Marge, I've so much fun with your challenge  Shame though the subject seems to miss his 'ode'(LOL) Sharon, I'll keep sending the links over as you requested, thanks for stopping by. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Want to use the pics on my website? Just let me know. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 12-09-2001).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Jeez! Take a day or two off and so much gets missed!! This is great! Marge, stop the contest! This is the winner!!!  It has poignancy, tenderness, emotion, sincerity and, most of all, it has... Thank you, Titia! I am very impressed with your talent and your foresight!!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LOL @ you, Balladeer *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ha Deer, I take it this healed your migraine quickly didn't it.Going away uhhh, when I was writing these good words about you???  You sure did take some SPAM with you  Well what else can I say after your lovely words than: TitiaA rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hey Marge, you're not supposed to be here  get back to your readingtable now you hear? sure must be a hell of a job  anyway, TitiaA rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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