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Dream River
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Dream River |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Lost in my thoughts on the river of dreams from placid pools to rushing streams Where did it start and where will it end this river that takes me back again For it takes me not on, but flows me back this river flowing in my mind of a certain tack Lost to the sound of rushing flow or spinning in a whirlpool circling so slow Throwing on a sand spit to rest awhile for it has taken me back many miles League upon league, through ages past knowing upon wake, it will never last From time of first cry to last close of eyes the dream river flows after first moon rise Are they true, where that flow takes me all these dreams that come to be Whether true or only in the mind it comes to me to seek and find with words on paper or in the head prose and poety, the dream river has led |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
does a huge moon appear, I would think it so for this river has its ever rightful flow its give and take, its push and pull to wend its flow round dreams so full |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah dear Logan, this river of dreams flows smoothly through my mind as I read. Lovely, lyrical and very soothing. A wonderful piece from you today gentle one. You have been missed. *soft smiles and a warm hug* Nancy Lee. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Your work always has a peaceful effect on me, like I've stopped to smell the sea. Cor |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Yes, it's very real....  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
From time of first cry to last close of eyes the dream river flows after first moon rise Are they true, where that flow takes me all these dreams that come to be Whether true or only in the mind it comes to me to seek and find with words on paper or in the head prose and poety, the dream river has led ========================================== From your pen to my dreams  its about time you got your tush back in here and gave me my dose of Logan wisdom. *L* this is wonderful sweet keeper...just what I needed tonite. Peace and poetry wise one jm Sprayed across my heart and hers |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Smiling, M'Lo---as I have just awakened from a river of dreams...and here ya are with this lovely piece. Miss you (and pssst...check with JM for how to keep in touch k?) Love to you, dear friend, now I must be off to see the wizard! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
'From time of first cry to last close of eyes the dream river flows after first moon rise Are they true, where that flow takes me all these dreams that come to be' Some dreams are destined to remain in dreamland. Others may come to be a part of reality. May your favorite special dreams come true. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
There is peace in the touch of your poetry and your prose, Sweet Warrior. You are wonderfully powerful in your gentleness!   Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful! (smiles) Your beautiful words always reflect the beauty of your dreams river, and you have so much beauty to share! (sigh) I love it, sweet Logan! (big hugggsssss) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Logan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I move along this dream river with you....I felt and understood each word for I too have dreams that fill my mind wondering if any can become reality. Magnificent. I will be keeping this wonderful poem that speaks like I feel so into my library it goes. Thank you. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Lady, your words are much better than mine, but then, they usually are, thank you for sharing them..very gentle smile Nancy Lee, you are always so kind and supportive. Good to see you also..very gentle smile Cor, hon, I really think that is the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me. Thank you for those words..very gentle smile Ahh, Elizabeth, thank you for the read and for being here..very gentle smile Ahh, Janet Marie, you do flatter me way too much. I see your name and feel the breeze of the butterfly. As always, thank you, gentle soul for reading and you always so kind comments..very gentle smile Serenity, I am glad you made it here then, very gentle smile, and yes, I will check with JM Ahh, Midnitesun, maybe my dreams are to write a few words that make some sense to others, and if that happens, then I am happy. Thank you for your support and being here, very gentle smile Ahh, my gentle princess, only to be matched by your own gentleness..very gentle smile to you Noah, thank you so much for your nice comments and for the read...gentle smile |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Startime, then you make my day with your kind words and thoughts, thank you, very gentle smile |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Logan you paint the most wonderful dreams with the gift of your words and wisdom. This touched me and now off to tuck this along with my other jewels of life. Thank you for this. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan--Your river takes you where your destiny waits..wheather forward or back, water fills your fate. Lovely to read you, friend poet! |
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