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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2001-12-05 10:34 PM

In the breakers misty blow
                 the same old heartache strikes again
                 a heavy swelling in my throat
                 far away from tender hands.
                 In a sure way I'll stay cold
                 on a windswept deck away
                 from the memories big and bold
                 of a golden yesterday.
                 A piece of heaven in my soul
                 turns to memories of the past
                 where a distant fire glows,
                 a lovelight candle calls me back.

                 In the breaker's misty blow
                 the same old heartache fills my eyes
                 In the breaker's misty blow
                 A voice is callin from the brine.

                 Here I stand alone again
                 ten thousand sailed miles away
                 with a cold and restless wind
                 blowing on my tear stained face.
                 Echoes roaming through my mind
                 of loving times at port of call
                 with the girl I left behind
                 on the shores of Montreal.
                 There's no lighthouse to be found
                 no immigration made for me
                 away from her I'm ocean bound
                 sailing on a cold gray sea.

                 In the breakers misty blow
                 the same old heartache fills my eyes.
                 In the breakers misty blow
                 I leave the light that fills the sky.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2001-12-05 10:38 PM

I like the way you ended this.
Hope to see more of your work.
Surfs up, dude!

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2001-12-05 10:42 PM

PT darling boy how are you? Wonderful writing and I get to be one of the first to reply. Utterly utterly wonderful dear heart.

As always your writing gets better each time I read it.

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 12-05-2001).]

Virgo_Rains
Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 54
Pacific Northwest, U.S.A.

3 posted 2001-12-05 10:43 PM

Beautiful and romantic but to a sad tune..It captures and holds

VR

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-12-06 12:01 PM

                 Here I stand alone again
                 ten thousand sailed miles away
                 with a cold and restless wind
                 blowing on my tear stained face.
                 Echoes roaming through my mind
                 of loving times at port of call
                 with the girl I left behind
                 on the shores of Montreal.
                 There's no lighthouse to be found
                 no immigration made for me
                 away from her I'm ocean bound
                 sailing on a cold gray sea.

                 In the breakers misty blow
                 the same old heartache fills my eyes.
                 In the breakers misty blow
                 I leave the light that fills the sky.
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Eric this is an aching beauty..such a melancholy melody but as  always written with your gifts for turning rhymes into lyrics and wrapping them up in the blues
way cool write E-babes.

he said ... "dont cry" ...
said "it only hurts forever ... and all we have is time."

~Tabitha's Secret~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-12-06 12:54 PM

ETHome~
What an absolutely marvelous write~

'A piece of heaven in my soul
turns to memories of the past
where a distant fire glows,
a lovelight candle calls me back.'

Such lovely, lovely imagery here~
I'm liking this very much~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

LadySofia
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 238
FL., USA

6 posted 2001-12-06 01:12 AM

Ah, the berating of the waves

...I've never seen Montreal. This was beautiful. Lo and Behold! The Misty Gates to the High Seas!

^_^ LadySofia

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2001-12-06 05:06 AM

Thanks to all for such kind words and for taking the time to read this!

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

8 posted 2001-12-06 10:18 PM

Sigh...darlin NB poet man...you sure know how to find the tears in me...beautiful sweet poet

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