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Hunter |
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
Hunter I draw my bow I aim it sure My left eye its a'blinkin' I spy my prey Thru right eye's squint But then my heart's a'thinkin' I'm strainin' now To hold the spring But caught 'tween worlds in conflict To shoot the thing Or stay the string The tension mounts demanding It's in my hands To cast the dice It seems so clear to me Then, inward cry To guide me by Is answered silently As unconcerned And unaware Prey steps behind a tree |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I am glad you are the kind of hunter that had second thoughts. Very well done, **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
May I give you a great big vegetarian kiss for this one? |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Being a hunter myself,I'm sad to see the prey stepped behind the tree.Very nice job,kept me interested. |
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