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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Written Music His tender words still sing to me, as distance draws him near Soft spoken from a loving heart, he whispers in my ear A song of life comes from his pen, sweet rhythm flowing pure With tones that stir my seeking soul my notice, he will lure His gentle words that touch my heart, sweet caress of senses Flowing deeply within my soul, breaking down defenses Warm is his breath upon my neck, while stirring passions fire He reaches me with unseen hands, and fills me with desire Such words he sings from loving heart, his poems are written music Is it passion he'd have me feel as he weaves pure magic? Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, to have a poet for a true love. Nice thought..Very nice. Made me smile a moment. Sandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I know what you are saying, Sandra. To love a man with a poetic heart would be the ultimate love to me too. **hugs** *sigh* let's keep dreaming...we never know what the future holds.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so good. I love it. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Oohh... such sweet love!! What more do we need, than to be held by our loved one... _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I always wanted for my guy to write me a poem. Some months back I posted a poem that I would have like for him to write to me, crazy right? I enjoyed it very much. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
SmartChick...*grin* I am glad you like this one. Don't we all wish we had a poet for a lover...it seems poets understand the deepest emotions. **hugs** Mon Cherie... yes, that is all we want. *grin* someday I hope to have just someone to hold and give all my love to. **hugs** I am glad you liked this poem. walker...*sigh* yes, what could be more romantic than to have a man you love write you a love poem...*sigh* what a dreamy feeling that would give us. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely said Karen! Enjoyed this one! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, let that magic weave it's spell, Frank Sinatra sang it well! Kathleen (Kay) |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very sweet thoughts,well done! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Karen Yet another stunning piece of romance you have afforded us. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Startime, you deserve to have an entire book written for you!! You bring out the poet in any man  |
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True Reflections Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 143Ohio, USA |
Karen, I love when women write about the effect poetry has on them from the man they love. Makes me want to write and write and write. I sent my wife my 'Ode to the Commode' but she didn't seem to be affected the way you were in your poem. Roger |
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