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SEA
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0 posted 2001-12-05 10:02 AM



Gifted
or ill gotten
my kisses
upon the dream
of your mouth
would free secrets
hidden deep
within my soul
revealing themselves
to the warmth
the passion
found
in your eyes
only to bury
and yet again hide
in reshapen form
and twisted tell
until such time
you kissed me
again


~SEA~

© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2001-12-05 10:07 AM


Sea,
Very nice, well done. Enjoyed

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2 posted 2001-12-05 10:09 AM




(sigh) Oh Susan, you are sooooooo romantic, your heart shines with love in this beautiful lovely poem! (sigh) It is amazing how one sweet kiss can have your heart whispering such sweet music to a loves ears! (sigh) I love it! (kiss on cheek) I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-05 10:10 AM



And I shall say ... again ...

you're growing...reaching, stretching....

writing...

Well done!

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4 posted 2001-12-05 10:54 AM


Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Wow!  Wonderful write!  I love it!  
Pucker up, gal  


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 12-05-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-12-05 02:11 PM


Karilea, is right!  Wonderful work, my friend.   (((hugs)))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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6 posted 2001-12-05 02:20 PM


Very,very nice!Enjoyed it.
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7 posted 2001-12-05 02:33 PM


SEA~
A BIG -
Oh yeah, girlfriend !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2001-12-05 02:49 PM


Sea,this was so romantic and full of love.

                    

Juanita

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9 posted 2001-12-05 03:18 PM


Susan!  Well this is what you have been up to whilst I have been recuperating.  
Nice one!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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10 posted 2001-12-05 03:22 PM


No light, flirty kisses here.  Joyce
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11 posted 2001-12-05 03:49 PM


thank you, each of you, very much...
my muse has been a complete tease lately  

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