O' Muse... (a little tinkering)

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Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2001-12-04 10:19 PM

Music of the Muse's quill,
As sweet as song of whippoorwill,
Echoes not a call to arms,
No morals hid within her charms,
Haunting odes of melancholy,
Cloaked idyllic, pastorale,
Beauty of midsummer's night,
Darkness bathed in Luna's light,
Throbbing verse of biting sorrow,
Suggestions of a new tomorrow,
Her song flows not, in width nor depth,
But one pure note in angel's breath,
Speaking not in mortal word,
Cecilia sings in tongue unheard,
Falls on the ear in satin voice,
Symphony of night's rejoice,
Striking hymns, bring heart's extol,
Lance deep within, lance mortal soul,
Madrigals of passion's long,
Whispered psalm, of welkin's song,
Soft caress of longing finger,
Feathered touch of passion's linger,
Drawing nigh, sweet angel's grace,
On weathered skin, doth beauty trace,
With tenderness, Muse draws me near,
Her healing balm, strokes down my fear,
From forth the dark; night's shadowed veil,
Sings forth Fair Muse, sings nightingale.
On heaven's winds, Eros doth bring her,
Soft caress of longing finger,
Music of the Muse's quill,
I long fair Muse, I ever will.

[This message has been edited by Tim (edited 12-04-2001).]

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-12-04 10:21 PM

This...this is what I long to write of, everything here. This is so very lovely.
I'm so glad I saw this one.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

LadySofia
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since 2000-05-16

Posts 238
FL., USA

2 posted 2001-12-04 10:25 PM

Soft caress of longing finger,
Feathered touch of passion's linger,

Those lines were pure and refined! Beautiful!

^_^ LadySofia

Damsal
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since 2000-05-07

Posts 7

3 posted 2001-12-04 10:28 PM

Fair Damsal sings to poet's muse
Mellifluence as floret's hues
The echo of the nightingale
Resounds harmonic sweet regale

Denise

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4 posted 2001-12-04 11:32 PM

Breathtaking, Tim! Fabulous!

Martie

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5 posted 2001-12-04 11:57 PM

You're always an artist of words, my friend.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2001-12-05 12:08 PM

Well you certainly made it difficult to pick a favorite line or lines, but these I absolutely loved...
Her song flows not, in width nor depth,
But one pure note in angel's breath,
This was simply lovely. Thank you.

Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

7 posted 2001-12-05 01:48 PM

Thank you all very kindly for the gracious responses. I am glad you enjoyed my little poem.

Nan

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