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. . . How you say D-I-V-O-R-C-E
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. . . How you say D-I-V-O-R-C-E |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
disintegration dissolving, dissolution liquefication Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Such deep thoughts~ Very well done, friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
devastatingly damaging, disasterous annihilating *sigh* I hope and pray it is never a word you have to say. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 12-04-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I hope it's not a word you are having to use.  HUGS to you  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It's hard to say it without gasping. Decidely difficult discourse. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
The new dawn found Her reawakening, Actually alive, Not buried dead, Kept hidden away by Gray skies looming, now the Open blooming of a girl, Dancing in rainstorms, Imagining miracles, Taking walks in the Sweet soft spring, Opening her eyes to the Veracity of Love! Emancipated! Rising! Finally adored! (*sigh* sometimes it's a very bad match.) |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Kitty cat kicking Careening kittens crying Cavorting Long John oops - sorry - it got away from me |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Marge ~ Thank you for the read dear friend Startime ~ Have said and your words I agree with except anihilating. Nothing, I repeat, NOTHING is anihilating ... net even physical death. SEA ~ Have used, gal. Midnitesun ~ An obstacle only. A challenge to be met. Doreen ~ I love your reply I would only amend that to reflect the male of the species, as inferior as we may be Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
ohhhh Interloper, what a scary concept.... ever deep...runs |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Long John ~ Thanks for stopping by. For being my 5000th visitor and commentor you have won a lifetime supply of Meow Mix. AWC ~ I sure can be Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 12-04-2001).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
.... sigh ......... [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-04-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Divorce? Now? At my age? Nah, won't do, just getting used to this guy after 33 years LOL Love your poem though Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Interloper, truer words were never spoken, and I love Doreen's response too. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ http://mysteriasmuse.netpoets.net [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 12-04-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
funny, that's how I feel now and I'm not even married to him yet....and yep, not that Doreen upstaged you, but had to love her reply! These would go well together side by side. Enjoyed! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That would do it! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
begin best friend pretend bend contend offend suspend no mend the end |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sometimes we shouldn't have vorced in the first place!  All those things and more......  |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
When I finally say 'I do' I hope it will be forever but...they say nothing lasts forever so it could possibly end in D-i-v-o-r-c-e! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Coco ~ Normally your sighs melt me. This, I fear, was of a different type Titia ~ God bless you both Mysteria ~ Thank you. You gotta love her reply Rose serenity ~ Yet? If you have those feelings now, better not get hitched Sunshine ~ Uh-huh. 1slick_lady ~ That about sums it up Balladeer ~ I allus wondered why it was not UNvorce RosePetal ~ If you have any doubts, any doubts at all, run, do not walk, away Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Interloper, Some should never INvorce in the first place. And if you stay until the ONLY solution is an OUTvorce, then it is appropriate to D-I-V-O-R-C-E. But then, that was just me. And Doreen nailed it - gender ain't the issue! Sweet liberty.  Guess I got over it, eh? Now see what you started... |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
VERY STRONG WORDS.... I HAVE A FEW MORE CONFUSING RELEASING OVER-POWERING AT TIMES AM A PRODUCT OF MY OWN PARENTS TRAINWRECK, AND THEN THE PAST REPEATED ITSELF WITH ME. GOD BLESS YOU TIMOTHYS ANGEL |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Could you repeat that for me, once again...slowly. Ok but, what if? And are we? Who gets the dog? I don't care about the furniture. My car? No, please...not my car. Here's a limb, pick one...no, not that one. PPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE, let me keep my car! |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You spelled out strong issues that come to the demise of a marriage. I'm no expert in marriage for sure. But boy am I having fun learning with someone willing to do so with me. I must admit...I was imprisoned once..not a marriage indeed. A dungeon of anquish. Yes..run don't walk if any doubts. Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Interloper _ well said, well said... BC |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Larry C ~ Yeah, I guess. Sure, I think. Well, um, uh, ov corse you are correct, aren't you? timothysangel1973 ~ Those work right in there, too Duncan ~ I think it was emminently fair ... a 50/50 split. She got the inside of the house and I got the outside Regina ~ Amen. Bill Charles ~ BC_thank you, thank you Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
You said a mouthfull. All of you! Admiring you at Passions. |
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