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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-12-04 01:19 PM

Riding
The Roller Coaster
of Love

Does
the roller coaster
of love
take you
where you want
to go

or
does it
seem
totally
out of
control?

JamesLee
December04
2001

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-12-04 01:39 PM

*giggling* I hope it is out of control...I love to lose control when I am in the arms of love. *sigh* I hope it isn't a roller coaster....even though I like roller coasters I want love to be many more ups than downs. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

2 posted 2001-12-04 01:52 PM

James, looking at this piece of poem sideways, it does look like a roller coaster too!!

There is the UP at first here:

Riding
The Roller Coaster
of Love

then the down and then UP again...

Does
the roller coaster
of love
take you
where you want
to go

then here, the roller coaster is coming to a stop...

or
does it
seem
totally
out of
control?

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Abigaile
Member

since 2001-10-21

Posts 112
San Mateo, CA

3 posted 2001-12-04 02:22 PM

I love this. I feel that when the ride seems out of control, that is true love. If you can guide its course, than the love you have is not pure. *SMILE*

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2001-12-04 02:48 PM

(smiles) Roller coasters scare me so much, so I will ride the tunnel of love! (smiles) I've never been in love but I dream of sailing softly and beautifully with my dream girl sparrow! (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet James, I always love your beautiful words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2001-12-05 08:26 AM

That about sums it up, James. Do you rememer an OLD song by the Ohio Players originaly, "Roller Coaster"? I always wanted to write a poem with that basis. Good one..
Sandra

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-12-05 09:21 AM

James,
It depends on who's ridding it. LOL

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

7 posted 2001-12-05 09:28 AM

James,as long as love is like a roller coaster love will stay exciting!

Juanita

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

8 posted 2001-12-05 10:59 AM

I think I will have to agree with Noah here,I'll ride in the tunnel of love.Roller coasters scare me to death.But I love the way you used it here.You took me on that ride from beginning to end.
Peaches

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

9 posted 2001-12-05 11:09 AM

I love the thrill of rollercoasters!
My ride on the 'coaster is always out of control, but thats ok because I wouldn't want love to be predictable.
Another good write from you James!!

RP

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-12-05 02:42 PM

only when one of you flies off the handle...

I hope you don't mind me, I'm in a silly mood today !!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Hypnosis
Member

since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

11 posted 2001-12-05 03:27 PM

Id love to ride this rollercoaster! I like this roolercoaster, but this one i believe will have many ups and downs. It could be a bumpy ride! If not something could be wrong

Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2001-12-05 04:44 PM

Well done James! Enjoyed! ~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

LadySofia
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 238
FL., USA

13 posted 2001-12-05 04:49 PM

Normally for me it's: sit back, hold on to something and prepare to eat grit, but...lol, maybe too much emphasis there. Too cool! Someone turn up the heat!

^_^ LadySofia

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