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The Coming of the Change
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The Coming of the Change |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA 
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How fragile the young and twisting green For lack of rain a sight most seen Brown beneath the withered trees Sick and fraught with drought’s disease Lazy haze of summer long Crunch and snap the season’s song Alas, the moor ‘tis nearly gone Those eager await the dew at dawn Time sullen until the day did come Brisk breeze bade the fragile boughs hum Hark! ‘ Tis blessed rain in the sky! Alluring, now the time is nigh Crisp and fresh the coming air All creatures ready and prepare Storms drawing near to liberate Those succumbing to El Nino’s fate |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautifully written, fellow Floridian. I can relate to this one very well...  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
  I sure like this one!Very nicely penned. Rain is needed to recharge those aquifers. Keep up the good work, it may help others to see the urgent need to preserve the wetlands and nature's bounty. I love nature poetry. Your muse is a friendly one |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... but would love to send you some of our wet! *G* Beautifully written, Lady... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This is wonderful writing... the cadence was pure pleasure when read aloud..and your poetic phrasing, use of language and imagery all combined for a lovely piece of poetry. Excellent write poetess LS |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadySofia~ Quite nicely penned~ Imagery of excellence~ Thank you for sharing with us~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Lady Sofia, I don't believe I've read you before, this is my kind of poetry, well actually all poetry is, but I mean this is the style that truly touches me deep down. I hope you have a ton more Kathleen (Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Such beautiful imagery and nature fills every word of your beautiful verse! (sigh) I love it!!! May the rain forever fall and bear fruits and joy for all of Mother nature and her world! (smiles) Sooooooo gorgeous, I love it, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amanda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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True Reflections Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 143Ohio, USA |
M'Lady, This was elegant and embracing. I love your writing style. This beckons to the times of Lords and Ladies and Love. Roger |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done! Enjoyed this very much! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
My humbled thanks to all but, thanks to the new smilies I can finally convey to Passions my deepest seat...  All of you, unknowingly, are such inspirations in your jubilation, and also in your release of it, straight from your hearts, minds and souls, trembling through your fingers down to quill-in-hand. There isn't much I can say other than that! I tip my cup to you! ^_^ LadySofia "The smallest feline is a masterpiece." |
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