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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Drained this life, mine has drained me of all strength unpacked my bags, bled my soul, milked my dreams mind now feeble, inadequate for the tasks before me you were right, always have been, and as I lay here anemic, faltering lacking the radiance of words I fade into the background, pallid, unsure the rumbling inside pounding heart within, warning of numbered days. ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul." (J.Garland) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 12-04-2001).] |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Late to bed and early to rise ... or was that another way, another day,... in disguise. No rest for the weary ... now if you were the wicked, that would be a whole other story.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Maureen, I can feel your tears, may you fade not into absence but into the light of hope and joy, and reach for the stars. (sigh) Your heart may feel drained, but it is always there, and it always floods with true love. (kiss on cheek) Know you are loved by many, sweet friend! You have sucha beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh I like this very much. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wynter, Winter has its season, spring will come. *L* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I remember feeling slightly like this...when I was holding onto a woman...making her all my world...thinking I could not live without her...never wanting to let go...she was going on with her life...in fact in her mind she had "killed me off"...these are her words...and finally I was able to let go and find that even though it was not my choice to live without her I could in fact do it...and I hope I never find myself in that place again because it was a fight to get out of that self imposed prison...James |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Dear one...you could never fade, your heart and words will not let you. Feel the hope around you and believe the dream for you never know when love will come to embrace you in its warm arms. **hugs** My heart goes out to you. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a fabulous, if sad, write. Your images spring to life and leap off the page! Wow! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
This one packs a punch, and hits right in the center of my heart !! I do hope that you can once again find your strengh, sometimes we just have to dig a little deeper than we thought in order to find it ! God Bless You Timothys Angel Dont let it end like this, tell them I said something. ~Pancho Villa |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Bump  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You will be missed, Maureen, your poetry, you...the person you are. It saddens me and yet there comes a time when a person must move forward. I admire you. Please keep in touch Even better, someday I hope to see your name here again ok? Merry Christmas sweetheart. Kathleen (Kay) |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
W/M, Our days are numbered from 1 and some are printed in blue others (we wish there were none) are of an inadequate hue But our days are all of color in reflections of the sun would not you be a culler of a day you've dearly won. K/e (hope your colors are brighter today) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Just sending huggs. Sandra |
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