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ownership of the heart
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ownership of the heart |
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Guardurthoughts Member
since 2001-10-16
Posts 66
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My heart beats a hundred times faster when I am with you You make me feel important make me feel that I matter Everything about you is perfect no matter what anyone says Your eyes keep me entranced, your touch gives me the chills Your lips tantalize me, When you crack dumb jokes I still laugh Because just being with you feels like it is a joke that it is not real That I am dreaming and my walls could come crashing in at any moment. You make me feel better about myself, and I love you for that. Whenever I smell you, I feel like melting into your arms I’ve felt this way for so long and you may not of known but you Know now so please I ask you don’t use my love for its fragile and Can break at anytime. I promise you I will do anything and everything To make you understand how I am feeling inside, I am done with hiding It. You own my heart and you always will but know I ask you are willing To take the key and be responsible [This message has been edited by Guardurthoughts (edited 12-04-2001).] |
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crazy4u Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 67 |
I liked this... its nice to warn someone to be responsible with our hearts.. now if they would only listen! lovely poem xoxo |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Fantastic poem; so romantic, it almost brings a tear of joy to my eye *sniff* . Loved it . Many thanks . L.of.L. Tommy . XXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A lovely poem this is. Enjoyed reading. |
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