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Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-12-03 08:24 PM



Open my hand, see it tremble
Look into my eyes, feel the pain
Come close to my heart, hear it strain
Walk with me, hold me

Take a moment, listen to the birds
Watch the day turn into night
From the dawn to the sunset
Sit besides me, sing me a lullaby

You have given me reason to live
Took away my pains, showed me love
I cried on your shoulders, you made me sleep
I will love you till the day I die, my butterfly

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2001 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
Bec
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since 2001-02-23
Posts 475
Canberra
1 posted 2001-12-03 08:29 PM


Daniel J D... Beautiful and moving. A wonderful write.

Bec  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
-Winnie-the-Pooh

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2001-12-03 08:30 PM


What a beautiful way to thank someone for being there for you.
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-12-03 08:41 PM


Daniel, this is beautiful!!  Enjoyed it so much.  
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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