Open Poetry #17 |
When You're Not There |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I lose all sense of direction Whenever I'm not with you I seem to be at a loss Not quite knowing what to do Everything loses its color Whenever you're not there The flowers lose their perfume And the trees they look so bare The sun forgets to shine The birds no longer sing My mood becomes very sombre No joy does this day bring The diamonds lose their lustre The sky is no longer blue Inside me it is raining As my heart it pines for you The moon has no silvery lining The sand is cold beneath my feet But all the colors will return to my life When you and I next meet Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Such sweet sorrow fills your words, but I know you will again embrace sweet heavenly love, and the angels will sing, the birds will chirp, and silver linings will light all your dreams eternally! (sigh) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow, Sue. Another nice love song floating my way on a south seas breeze! (I just finished reading Daniel's) The board sure is busy with LOVE these days. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, As always, I love your poetry. But don't be too long without your love! |
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