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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-12-03 08:18 PM


I lose all sense of direction
Whenever I'm not with you
I seem to be at a loss
Not quite knowing what to do

Everything loses its color
Whenever you're not there
The flowers lose their perfume
And the trees they look so bare

The sun forgets to shine
The birds no longer sing
My mood becomes very sombre
No joy does this day bring

The diamonds lose their lustre
The sky is no longer blue
Inside me it is raining
As my heart it pines for you

The moon has no silvery lining
The sand is cold beneath my feet
But all the colors will return to my life
When you and I next meet

Suetang

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1 posted 2001-12-03 08:29 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Such sweet sorrow fills your words, but I know you will again embrace sweet heavenly love, and the angels will sing, the birds will chirp, and silver linings will light all your dreams eternally! (sigh) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-03 08:34 PM


Wow, Sue. Another nice love song floating my way on a south seas breeze! (I just finished reading Daniel's)
The board sure is busy with LOVE these days.    

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3 posted 2001-12-05 12:48 PM


Sue,
As always, I love your poetry. But don't be too long without your love!  

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