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Five Story Castle In The Sky
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Five Story Castle In The Sky |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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Five Story Castle In The Sky There's a place I'll be where life can't ever end There'll be no measure of time or moments to recall There will be much value in form of extreme love on the winds And, weightless to the world so I could never fall... I will build it with these two hands created of the blood Of my Mother and Father with such enormous love Layer by layer will each have a priceless meaning to hold My five story castle in the sky can never grow old... My first layer will be made straight from the heart Will stand strong from the words I was taught to understand So, God be with you my Mother and Father, I heard you all along From you, this floor will be built just from who I am... My second layer will know only of what God placed in my arms Will be molded with sweetness beyond any gift received It's going to be textured in nothing but pastel pink and blue Smothered with eternally grateful walls for my children and me... The third layer will consist of solid surroundings of where I've been in life With it's maze like features throughout the whole floor Each step through I will know again, peace, joy, and hope And, every corner will remind me just what I've been living for... The fourth floor will be a silhouette of those who carried me in the palm of their hands And, in stone will be their souls just the same Structured with some delicacy, some laughter, and an endless song Will be my friendship floor carved with each of your names... The fifth story will be the most easiest to build Cause, I have a lot of faith and extreme free will Every method I create throughout will have wings before your eyes My fifth floor will be for and with God way on into that sky... I didn't forget to build my foundation to this awesome place I just waited to reveal this person's wonderful face You must have something beyond tough to hold this place up So, I will build it from the only one who ever cared this much... Built with freedom this foundation will be plain to see Built with the courage he is giving to me My Friend out there you know who you are and what you've been So, my five story castle will lie strongly as my love for him... Deeply, truly, and everlasting will be viewed When my castle shines up there in front of all of you You'll witness my Friend's heart in many shades all the way around And, once I am through building this castle, I'm never coming back down... *Sauni* @~~>~~> Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  CLAPPING WILDLY!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) Oh Saunni, your love shines heavenly and majestically in this marvelous expressive poem! (sigh) A place for our heart, a place for your children, a place for peace, joy, and hope, friendship, and Love. (sigh) Oh Saunni, this is by far one of your best yet, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) This place will always rest in you, as will your love always shine! God Bless You, I love you so much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Saunni This was so very beautiful. Every layer was tendered so lovingly by your warm and caring heart. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
That is one very fine castle, Sauni. And each floor is unique, designed just for you. Hugs, and have a great big smiley day. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
A beautiful castle for Queen Sauni! Loved this! RP |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done! Enjoyed this one thoroughly. hugs, Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
build away my friend. . . and let your heart shine. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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