Open Poetry #17 |
Marge's Challenge: #2: When Sunlight Falls |
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
night melted out of sight and yellow sparkles flew, to open deep blue eyes through early morning dew. ~ his horse had been riding during night's total spill, for his regal achieve, with love's aim to fulfil. the mist lifted self slow as the prince rode his steed, like whispers in the wind, strides steady, yet with speed! the ripples were tranquil on the bed of the lake, as young swans took to swim in morn's peaceful awake. light breeze of life flew in, and with it came the sounds, of birds singing in chirps - sweet hums with joy abound. the princess was glad too, as today was the day, when all her years of wait - would end, be washed away. like uncurling flowers, her glee was to expand, when the spring sun's first rays rushed fore to take her hand. as soft sounds of serene were cut by eager breaths, springing from sweet accord that her winter's seen death. dressed in radiant smiles, waltzing with emeralds, she's kissed the birth of dawn, rejoicing love's herald. ~ 'tis very true that all this is plain fantasy but when sunlight falls through curtains, it's so easy. ~ #2 ~ Marge's challenge is here: /pip/Forum52/HTML/001099.html ~*~ ~*~ dance, dance, O lovely one dance in rays, full of style dance, dance, O pretty one dance this ballet of smiles dance, dance, O lovely one while the sunlight falls through dance, dance, O pretty one dance this song all day through ~*~ ~*~ [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 12-03-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
When sunlight falls is the best time for a fantasy to begin... come, sweet dusk! Wonderful! |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Sudhir, you paint a very pretty picture with your words. Lovely... ME |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ What a positively wonderful piece this is~ You give me many smiles, sweet friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank you all... my dear friends... regards, sudhir |
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