Open Poetry #17 |
Love Tankas (For My Love Joanna) |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Love Tankas (For My Dream Girl Joanna) By: Noah Eaton 12/2/01 Kissing A Red Rose Kissing a red rose The heart of a sweet angel Magically opens Showering me with her love Wreathing me in her petals A True Love So Beautiful She visits my dreams A true love so beautiful With emerald eyes Sparkling like the heart of spring Melting my heart with amore Forever And Ever Sweet love, hand in hand We’ll roller-blade all our dreams Kissing every star Dreaming on a crescent moon Loving you eternally [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-02-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Absolutely beautiful...she will love them, Noah...be prepared to catch her when she swoons. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Noah, These are so precious! Joanna will love them! Well done my sweet friend. ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
How very sweet is your love and willingness to sing it to the world for her. This is beautiful, Noah. Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
wow these are awesome noah. Thank you, thank you!!! (hugs) beautiful!!! your making me blush, hehe |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
You have a real talent for these. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Romantically beautiful. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
How sweet!! These are lovely. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I hope she knows how lucky she is Noah, to have such beautiful love songs written and sung to her. Love, Joyce |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
They're ALL so sweet!! Especially Kissing a Red Rose _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Awww! Ain't that sweet! Your going to make me cry! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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PoetriPrincess Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 55CA / U.S.A |
Soooo Sweet, I think I have a cavity. They are so endearing, She'll love em' A Musician must make his Music, |
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