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Duncan
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0 posted 2001-11-15 01:42 AM




Forgive my lateness
I was remiss
not puckering up sooner
but with so many to kiss
I thought it prudent
believed it wise
to stop by the gym
give the weights a rise
now I’m ready
lips toned and buff
hope my workout
proves to be enough
now Coco gets a double
being first to reply
and Tracey a dozen
think she knows why
peaches next
then our girl Marge
giggle all you want
it’s part of your charm
walker then
a fan of kissing
Annie next
this one I’m not missing
Janet Marie, sincerely
Sunshine, quite well done
Lady of Shallot will be back in line
for another one
Jenn Cirrincione
leaves me sighing, too
SEA, it’s I
who stand in line for you
for Abigaile
a sweet kiss of bright
Enchantress, put down that book
for a kiss just right
Titia dear, you’re never late
just don’t want to appear to eager
Kacy, it’s so dark these days
almost didn’t see ya
Tiersdin, stories
unending yes
much like this long
overdue kiss
dorreen, no doubt
as I get to you
cracking jokes
the whole way through
nakdthoughts
just tell me where
I’d love to make you
giggle there
Irish Rose
is back in line
though under a different
name this time
rwood
yes only a fool
would pass on a kiss
from you
Startime is lucky
I’ve saved the best for last
but now seeing Larry
I’m running quite fast
Irish Rose to the rescue
and rwood again
so this guys not just fond of
kissing his kin
Sonya so sweet of you
to jump in at this time
Larry’s beginning to worry me
seems most often in this line
Enchantress back
has called my bluff
so right dear Nancy
time to pay up
For all of you ladies
help me hold Larry at bay
it’s the sincerest of kisses
I give you today
for making my nights
the fun that you do
a kiss for you all
from me to you

© Copyright 2001 Duncan - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2001-11-15 01:58 AM


Duncan,
Surprise! Now see all you had to say was, form another line! I'm ready baby. You are going to share, right?  

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-15-2001).]

Midnitesun
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2 posted 2001-11-15 02:13 AM


ROTFLMAO....the line goes all the way to the Arctic and back down to Florida, over to catalina, up to Canada and....Europe and Australia no doubt. Was anyone left out?
Grampa, you have to wait your turn.

Larry C
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3 posted 2001-11-15 02:30 AM


Hey,
I'll just be right here in my rockin' chair!
Sorry Duncan, this was your party.

walker
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4 posted 2001-11-15 07:19 AM


This is so cute and funny. Thanks Duncan.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-11-15 09:06 AM


OH BOY!!  He's good!!  I'm lining up again...  
Good one Duncan...You did pay up!!
And How!!!     Hugs, Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-11-15 10:56 AM





well, hello to you and I don't remember giving you permission to kiss me!  
I'm teasing. Maybe one of these days I will learn how to flirt and what a time that would be!  This is fun, I enjoyed it!

Kathleen
(Kay)

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 11-15-2001).]

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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2001-11-15 10:59 AM


Methinks you may need to get back in the gym for a while to be able to sustain a pucker
Janet Marie
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8 posted 2001-11-15 11:06 AM


SMOOCHES

(SINCERELY OF COURSE)  

I like a man who keeps his word  *L*

cute and clever Duncan  

Sonya
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9 posted 2001-11-15 01:05 PM


XOXOXOXOXO!
I just LOVE kisses!
Thank you for making my day! (I needed it!)
S~
(Sonya)

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10 posted 2001-11-15 01:53 PM


Gee, can I get in line too???  Please.....
Cute write Duncan.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Titia Geertman
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11 posted 2001-11-15 05:31 PM


Am I too late, too late for a kiss
I'm always late but this one I won't miss
I lay down my work for a kiss from you
And maybe you'll get few back from me too

              
              
                


Oh jee, my mistake there are more than a few
So maybe you'll give some to Larry C too
He's become a grandpa quite recently you know
And me, all blushing   soon to sleep I'll go

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Startime
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12 posted 2001-11-15 05:36 PM


mmmmmmm I knew I would love your kisses. Do you think I could have a couple more to help me to dream by?

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tracey
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13 posted 2001-11-16 12:29 PM


i'm jumping in for my dozen BEFORE ya start kissing Larry!!! Then, when you're done kissing everyone else, don't get too tired out cause i'm coming back for another dozen or two!!!
And what's this i hear, Larry a grandfather??? The things I miss when I go away. I'm gonna have a lot of catching up to do on pip when I get back sunday. Congratulations Larry if you read this.
(ps, second surprise Duncan in case e-mail isnt working again, I found a place here in savannah with internet access. I'll be back Sunday to collect on those kisses!! lol)

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

peaches73533
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14 posted 2001-11-16 12:49 PM


I enjoyed this very much and the kisses too.
Peaches

Tiersdin
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15 posted 2001-11-16 08:12 PM


Encore, for sure!  *chuckles*

*kissy kisses*

~Tier

Larry C
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16 posted 2001-11-16 09:12 PM


Hey,
Even granpas need kisses, I discovered from personal experience! Thanks Tracey & Titia. Duncan, I like your parties...when is the next one?  

Balladeer
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17 posted 2001-11-16 09:22 PM



Thank you!

Thank you!

THANK YOU!!!

(for not including me!)
RosePetal
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18 posted 2001-11-16 10:40 PM


Kiss me last duncan, save the best for last hehehe...well actually i dont want to be kissed last because by that time your lips will be all chapped and needing a break.
CocoBaci
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19 posted 2001-12-04 02:52 PM


Duncan, my goodness what a treat2come back2 N see this adorable poem...

Tis the ultimate in surprise and I gotta hand it2u cuz it's soooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet it truly is PoetFriend...


*~coco~*

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-04-2001).]

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20 posted 2001-12-04 03:01 PM


Duncan~
Just when I think someone doesn't really know me... THIS~

'then our girl Marge
giggle all you want
it’s part of your charm'


*Kisses* and *giggles* just go together~

I do both with great delight~

Thanks for a cute write~

Balladeer ... you've got your own line to tend~

*Hugs* n' *Kisses* n' *Giggles*
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Midnitesun
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21 posted 2001-12-04 03:10 PM


Here we go on the kissing merrygo round for another go around. Pucker up Duncan, the lines keeps getting longer and there isn't even any mistletoe hanging out here yet!
Except Mistletoe angel, and he isn't in line 'cuz he's starting his own line.  Do you suppose we need to have a Pips Kissing contest? Lots more fun than those old *issing contests!      But we should wait 'till Marge's contest is over since the board is already flooded with so many goodies those kisses might get lost!

Robert A
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22 posted 2001-12-06 10:58 AM


I should get in here to these forums more often, what the hell am I missing  
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