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Love's Power
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Love's Power |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Love's Power It flowed into me making my blood sing melting me inside as my heart took wing It warmed my cold flesh lighting desire sending heat rushing setting love's fire It was so gentle filled with feeling its touch so tender my senses realing It told me so much I could feel the heat deep and caressing my heart missed a beat Sighing I listened not missing a word showing love's power as your voice I heard I opened my eyes was it just a dream still a fantasy created for me Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Karen, this is soooooooooo beautiful, I know just how you feel and how lovely a feeling it is! (smiles) It may just be a dream now, but very soon, you will feel the power of true love in you, and it will last forever! (smiles) May the cupids touch your heart with the most beautiful love of your dreams, sweet star! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
As always, your poetry is deeply heartfelt! I loved it! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Another lovely dream from you. Sandra |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
That's some kinda dream u have there...  So sweet and so sensual... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Karen Your words sang such a beautiful song of love and longing. Take care.......Sue Suetang |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Soon enough you are going to feel these effects of Love's Power! You deserve happiness sweet friend, and you will get it, believe me, you will! (big hugs) Lovely poem RP |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Karen, the power of love! Another wonderful romantic write! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You write such beautiful romantic poems. Thank you for sharing this one. |
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