Open Poetry #17 |
A Truth |
plug452 New Member
since 2000-05-22
Posts 6natchitoches, louisiana. U.S.A |
A truth The joys Of life Are only seen Through distant Eyes Happiness Is known From pain Sorrow makes The light shine Bright The night Reveals The day |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
No ying without the yang. Enjoyed! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
every phrase was packed with truth, and opened the mind to reality! Great write here! And we haven't met, but I like your style and welcome to Passions!!! The road goes on forever, the stories never end, and people are the same the world over! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Simply put, but well done! enjoyed. Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well said. A powerfully bright flashlight is more visible in the dark than outside on a bright sunny day. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very nice. Welcome to passions. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Luke, this is so very true, for I believe we learn better to love after first feeling the sorrow so we can share compassion with others and heal their pain! (sigh) Sooooooo wonderfully expressed, sweet friend! Welcome to Passions, may you be inspired by us all here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (big hugggssssss) I can't wait to read more of your wonderful verse! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Luke, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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