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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-12-01 05:36 PM

The Golden Skein of Word

he pondered
          words swelled
                   thoughts rambled
                              passions welled
he penned
          expressions flew
                   demeanor changed
                              obsessions grew

she quietly mused
           found words on wind
                   read then what he wrote
                              her secret touched within
she penned
          expressions flew
                    demeanor changed
                              obsessions grew

quiet grew he in her read
           heart pounded pleasantly
                     penned he word with hidden grace
                               wistfully thought of her face

she glowed in smile
           inner secrets trembled
                      wound her pen around a reflection
                                he read with deep introspection

he deigned to draw
           the skein of pure raw
                       affection from her heart
                                 complexion he'd impart

she softly struggled to catch her breath
            as feelings from her he softly wrest
                       from the golden skein of word he drew
                                   from her the shy quickly flew

electric in their obsessive zeal
            the golden skeins of word grew real
                      and life again poured forth from within
                                   having touched inner secrets therein

they penned
          expressions flew
                   demeanor changed
                              obsessions grew

1 December 2000
reposted with pleasure...
1 December 2001

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-12-01 05:51 PM

"they penned
          expressions flew
                   demeanor changed
                              obsessions grew

I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!!Then she and he became they...BRAVO!!!**hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-12-01 05:57 PM

this is a lovely weaving Sun...
eloquent and delicate with an undercurrent of intensity between the lines...
reads like a pretty blue flame

*L*

he said ... "dont cry" ...
said "it only hurts forever ... and all we have is time."

~Tabitha's Secret~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2001-12-01 05:58 PM

Karilea--Thank you for this repost that returns the smile you gave me...wonderfully done!!!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-12-01 07:13 PM

Karilea! Thank you for reposting this one...I had not seen it before!
Remarkable in its beauty!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2001-12-01 07:48 PM

CLAPPING WILDLY!!! Oh Karilea, you're soooooooo romantic, this is soooooo beautiful! May he and she become one forever! (smiles) I love it, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Eloise
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since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

6 posted 2001-12-01 07:52 PM

Absolutely beautiful! So glad I got to see it this time around.

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