Open Poetry #17 |
The Cook |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Chopping onions and carrots with a frown Over and over the blade goes down Filling the bowl with twice as much Those tears are from the onions you see, Because there is nothing bothering me Well perhaps just a slight touch. The hours are longer than I’d desire And the kitchen is always hot with fire, And the dishwasher fills it with steam Noisy with hissing, clanging and clatters After twelve hours nothing really matters I just want to go home to a pleasant dream So sleep overtakes me and what do I dream Strawberry shortcake with lots of whipped cream. Gloom |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
That is SO true! I'm no professional or anything, but I cook a lot. WOW! That was great. Thank you so much for sharing it! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Professor! This is really good! The cook who goes home tired, only to dream of more food! Love this one, hugs, Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
This is great, Gloom. You sure got this one down! Can't escape, even in sleep. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Ohhh my dad could relate to this, he's a chef also! Love the dessert mm mmmm |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Zukene_Chic, Glad you liked it, I know a chef or two, I hope it’s pleasing to them Thank you, Enchantress, Does make it real, with a twist, Sometimes it’s hard to escape the stress. Thank you, Duncan Glad you enjoyed, Reality at time even invades dreams Thank you, RosePetal, Pleased you liked it, perhaps your dad will too, The dream of dessert was so it would be a sweet dream Gloom |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
ah Mr. Cook you know just how to get to my heart. I love this wonderful poem and I absolutely love strawberrie shortcake with cream...*sigh* you sure know how to wet the appetite. *sigh* BRAVO!!!**hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is funny! I love strawberry shortcake. This is very good, Professor Gloom. |
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