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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2001-12-01 08:12 AM

Butterscotch Sky

The sun was a lemon drop, catching my eye
Gleaming a twinkle in buttersctch sky
And white candy cotton just floated on by
That’s just how it was, and I never would lie

The mountains were cupcakes, with icing-capped peaks
We stopped and just nibbled away there for weeks
Where a soda pop river meanders and leaks
Right into a lake they call, “Come Take a Peek”

The lake was well stocked with those red Swedish fish
You could rent necco wafers, the flavor you wish
And row out on this saucer, a sweet fishing dish
And catch red Swedish fish that were simply delish

The night sky was covered with dark chocolate bars
Sprinkled with sugary crystally stars
I remember it well, and everything’s true
If you don’t believe, I feel sorry for you

It sounds like a fantasy stretched a bit far
But that’s just the way dreams of childhood are
If you look out the window, you’ll see it’s no lie
There’s a lemony sun in a butterscotch sky

Elizabeth Santos

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-12-01 08:16 AM

Well now you've done it. My coffee just isn't enough and you've got me hungry!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-12-01 08:28 AM

Elizabeth,
I love butterscotch and thanks for taking me back. Sy

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2001-12-01 09:04 AM

Elizabeth,
What an imagination.What an amazing picture, Thanks for meeting Marge's challenge in such a sweet way.
Keth.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-12-01 10:33 AM

LizzieLady~
Well ... I just love it~
What a lovely 'inspire' of sweet thoughts~
Thank you for sharing such a delightful write~
Love you~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-12-01 10:33 AM

superior poetry, images, everything. Made my mouth water, that's how real it is!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-12-01 11:05 AM

oh I love this... makes me wish we still had the game Candyland

This is a most enjoyable poem

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2001-12-01 11:10 AM

Wow, this is really neat Liz - I especially like the first stanza and the rest just made it all the more better...

jwesley

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

8 posted 2001-12-01 11:17 AM

Can a poem be delicious? Well this one certainly is!

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-12-01 08:30 PM

I'm wondering what Willy Wonka would say. . .

well done my friend. . .

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Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

10 posted 2001-12-01 09:01 PM

Delicious indeed, Elizabeth!! I wish I had some of those Neco Wafers right about now!

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

11 posted 2001-12-01 09:11 PM

Oh I love this one. It is perfectly delightful and filled with all the best flavors. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2001-12-01 09:15 PM

Wonderful Elizabeth! Yummy indeed!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

13 posted 2001-12-01 09:58 PM

Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm! Oh my gosh, this vision is sooooooo delicious and beautiful, I love it!!! (smiles) Now I'm going to lick my way down the Jolly Rancher rainbow! (kiss on cheek) I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Ocean Beauty
Junior Member

since 2001-11-24

Posts 18
VT, USA

14 posted 2001-12-01 10:02 PM

Now, I'm very hungry!!! I could definitely go for some of those Sweedish fish! heehee
~Dawn~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

15 posted 2001-12-01 11:39 PM

Yummy poem. You've made my sweet tooth kick in! Not to mention I'll be dripping in butterscotch dreams tonight.

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

16 posted 2001-12-01 11:51 PM

You did a wonderful job an this.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

17 posted 2002-01-03 03:26 AM

Now how did this one slip me by...yummy, butterscotch is my favorite and so are you

This was simply delicious and totally delightful!

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

18 posted 2003-01-26 05:21 AM

awesome imagery here! love this!

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