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First Kiss x 2 Marges' Challenge
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First Kiss x 2 Marges' Challenge |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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It was a sunny day in Miami (they all were) giant grasshoppers wandered past, startling me a bit Ricky and I sat under the tree his sparkling blue eyes gazed questoningly at me He ganced around the side of the house surreptitiously and quick, just like that..he grabbed a kiss and ran off home His mother was calling we were six. I sat for some time under the tree, contemplating. Not many days later I sat on my back steps with a boy of chocolate brown eyes he was Diego, a real charmer had walked me home from school that day and stayed a while he held my hand and I felt an odd curiosity Not for long because he kissed me, a long delicious kiss almost like the ones many years later, abruptly interrupted by my Mom opening the back door who knows-if she had not interfered we might yet be kissing... [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 12-01-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WoW Sandra! You have a great memory! Wish I could remember the fella's name...if I try hard I can see his face. He was a cutie, but, I was still scared to kiss him. I liked this one. ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Mmmmmmmmmmm! Oh my gosh, I dream ever so much for my first kiss, and I know the lady sparrow I want to share it with! (smiles) I can't wait to feel what it's like, it must be sooooooo enchanting! (sigh) I love it!!! You always share such lovely memories! (kiss on cheek) May you soon be loved again heavenly! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!!That is some memory. I love it.  **hugs**Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Believe me, you could have made 6 cents if you had played your cards right!  This is great! Ah, those days of innocence..weren't they wonderful?  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Deer, I was having too much fun to think about money LOL Ah, I would love to see those two grown up..Hm, maybe an internet search.. Yes, its fun remembering days of innocence. Days when you did not know what broken heart meant.. S |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is so sweet and cute. I just read about Marges challenge, and when I'm done my homework for poetry workshop, I'm going to attempt one of the challenges. This is great Sandra...oh, for those innocent days of our youth If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sandra, ah love's first kiss...it remains in our memory like so many other firsts...and warms our tired cold hearts with essence of remember. Good write Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! This is very good. You sure have a good memory. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Very sweet and innocent. A great look into your past romantic beginnings. Diego sounds like a little Cassanova to me! Enjoyed! Sincerely, Regina |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ I just love it when a memory walks us down an avenue we've KNOWN~ Adorably done ! Thank you for sharing the 'inspire'~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Ooh... those stolen kisses...  So sweet and exciting, isn't it? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I can barely remember my first kiss...but I do remember the mom wasn't around and it was like a whole new world was born...James |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Sooo cute and nice for you to tell us of those days..... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 12-01-2001).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sandra, oh I've missed your writing, this is uterly wonderful. (It's a good job I'm not judging this contest I'd never be able to choose a winner, this is absolutely fabulous) I can't remember my first kiss, Oh my wretched memory  I have missed the smiles of this place, and I've missed you, I've missed the way you can reach right into a soul and place the emotion there. Fabulous writing love  Love and warm stuff as always Mushy   And darling girl hearts do mend they really do, just look at me, I'm scattering rainbows |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep them good old day!!! Enjoyed this memory very much, my friend, woke up a few of mine too. Yes! jwesley |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Enjoyed this very much.. I really like poems about children and this was a great one. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a great memory! I remember my first kiss too, but I can't write about it for some reason. Oh well, Marge gave us many to choose from. Good luck! |
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