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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2001-11-30 08:54 PM

I have cents ability
I'm a nickel in a ten cent world
So second hand is my debility
As too late I'm hurled

I fell within the slips of costs
As a nickel in a ten cent world
But something gained is nothing lost
When prices are unfurled

And bargains all around are twirled
Money to re-arrange
I may be a nickel in a ten cent world
But to me it's all just change

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

[This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 11-30-2001).]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-11-30 09:36 PM

Oh this poem is absolutely delightful. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2001-11-30 09:39 PM

Thanks so much startime, It's nice that my rhyme made so much cents.
Be well
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-11-30 09:42 PM

Keth---I've missed you. I think this is terrific and I understand the feeling. HUGS to you---have missed your wit and wisdom!

Balladeer

Administrator

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2001-11-30 10:08 PM

Hey, Keth, I will never think of you as a two-bit poet again!

You done good, my girl....real good!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2001-11-30 10:23 PM

serenity,
wit and wisdom will beat spit and polish hands down. Thanks

Deer
I am a two bit poet, I do a bit here and a bit there. Thanks
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

6 posted 2001-11-30 10:45 PM

Keth darling sister of my heart, I'm here aren't I? You surely don't want me to say anything do you? Good grief sister dearest are you never content? I've worked my fingers to the bone.

Yes it's wonderful, yes it's marvellous and yes it's magic. Well that's it, there's no point in hanging about for other phrases to fall onto the page. You don't want fulsome praise do you? Certainly not. If I praise you then you'll stop working, so mush mush mush.

Go on leave then, there won't be any bravi's or bravissimi's. (tsk tsk, well just because it deserves it doesn't necessarily mean you're going to get any does it?

Oh okay then but this is under protest you know

Bravi Bravi Bravissimi

Love and warm stuff
as always
Slushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2001-11-30 10:51 PM

Wow! This is really good.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2001-12-01 08:27 AM

Marsha,
well I expected high praise...not hi praise. Well that you turned up is enough I suppose.

smartchick,
thanks for stopping buy and for the wow...I'm a wowser at heart.

Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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